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focused rhyme and rhythm of my breathing calmed thoughts in my head drift and sway circling the path to peace AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on March 27, 2022 for contest FORM K - KIMO sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 3RD

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Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2022 12:17:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:28:00 PM

love the imagery of yours, Line. Congrats for your win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/30/2022 12:48:00 PM

So peaceful a picture of corralling all those drifting thoughts Line! Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of serenity and a lasso!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2022 2:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sam.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/30/2022 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write/picture. A few words that tell a wonderful story. Yes, peace. Have a great/blessed day with your win...............

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2022 2:14:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula ~ most appreciated.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/28/2022 7:23:00 PM

"circling the path to peace" - Noble orientation. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2022 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christuraj ~