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The pieces fit together, day by day— through trial and error- curve fits in a curve. But many times, in haste, a part is placed that's wrong; the misfit somehow jars the rest so time is spent redoing what was done to bring it to its former tidy state. Though day by day, and year by year it's worked, so slowly forms the image that's been planned— since many times, the challenge seems too great, and so, it's often pushed away from sight. Still other times, the pieces fit in place renewing eager interest in the game. And slow but sure, the shapes are interlocked, each one a vital portion of the whole, revealing, bit by bit, the total scene. And all that's hoped before the colors fade, the vision of life’s masterpiece, complete— the portrait of our finished dream—well done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/23/2023 6:46:00 AM
Sandra, you have brilliantly maintained the analogy of life to a puzzle. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 6/8/2019 7:48:00 PM
Your brilliant artistry shines in this beautifully expressed poem, Sandra. Your wondrous theme is 'well done' and is perfectly titled, as well. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/11/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/6/2019 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem winning Second place my friend! : ) xxoo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 6/11/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/3/2015 9:25:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/1/2015 12:48:00 AM
Sandra, beautifully done, I like the theme of your poem, the flowing words, the phrasing all interwoven, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, quick exit
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:16:00 PM
How you express yourself is what makes your poetry unique and qualifies it as art. Emile. #7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2015 6:28:00 PM
Thank you, Emile. I am pleased your enjoyed this poem. Hope it fits the judge's theme. I appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and support. Sandra

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