Notes About The Poem

The Puzzle of Life

The pieces fit together, day by day—
through trial and error- curve fits in a curve.
But many times, in haste, a part is placed
that's wrong; the misfit somehow jars the rest
so time is spent redoing what was done
to bring it to its former tidy state.

Though day by day, and year by year it's worked,
so slowly forms the image that's been planned—
since many times, the challenge seems too great,
and so, it's often pushed away from sight.
Still other times, the pieces fit in place
renewing eager interest in the game.

And slow but sure, the shapes are interlocked,
each one a vital portion of the whole,
revealing, bit by bit, the total scene.
And all that's hoped before the colors fade,
the vision of life’s masterpiece, complete—
the portrait of our finished dream—well done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Canerdy Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Sandra, you have brilliantly maintained the analogy of life to a puzzle. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Ashley Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Your brilliant artistry shines in this beautifully expressed poem, Sandra. Your wondrous theme is 'well done' and is perfectly titled, as well. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem winning Second place my friend! : ) xxoo
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! Hugs, Sandra
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May 3, 2015 at 9:25 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
La France Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Sandra, beautifully done, I like the theme of your poem, the flowing words, the phrasing all interwoven, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, quick exit
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April 30, 2015 at 12:16 PM
How you express yourself is what makes your poetry unique and qualifies it as art. Emile. #7
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Emile. I am pleased your enjoyed this poem. Hope it fits the judge's theme. I appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and support. Sandra
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