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The Purple Pleasure

Sunny morning--- the last dew drop still clings to a flower a tiny rainbow on its wings--- a busy humming bird the purple pleasure from flower to flower--- dripping nectar breakfast table--- sweet sound and scent filling the air By:kash poet Date: 23rd April 2012

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/23/2012 7:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kash. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2012 4:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2012 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/23/2012 4:00:00 AM

right on, kashi.. big cheers to you for the win!..:) huggs!

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 5/23/2012 2:54:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2012 9:19:00 PM

Kash,,. Congratulations,, for your awesome entry in my shh!! ~ contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enyable day, :-) PD

David Williams

Date: 5/22/2012 2:14:00 PM

Kash congrast on your win..David

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/8/2012 6:18:00 AM

A beauty and surely a pleasure to read Kash, belated congratulations with this one :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/8/2012 3:30:00 AM

I've read a few more of your Haiku this morning... They are really splendid... Terry (the other one) recommended you as a source of inspiration for (though not limited to) Haiku... I would like to do something like this & Terry has given me the 'ground rules' ... I've tried a couple but :-(( Some 'have it' and some don't... Thanks... Terry

Ashesh Das

Date: 5/1/2012 1:20:00 PM

A pleasure to read your work. Beautiful visual, sound and scent filling reader's mind.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 8:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2012 3:35:00 PM

Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Congrats on your win..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/25/2012 7:27:00 PM

I would have put this way higher.. so pretty. congrats. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2012 12:07:00 PM

I ASKED MY SIS ABOUT THE PICTURE.. AND HONESTLY I THINK EVERYONE, BUT A FEW MISS READ THE CONTEST PAGE. WHEN SHE SAID USE THE PICTURES. SHE WAS REFERRING,,, TO USE HER PICTURES FOR IDEAS, AND INSPIRATION... LOL... NOT TO USE THEM AND POST A PICTURE.. SHE WAS TALKING TO WRITE ABOUT THE PICTURE.. NOT TO POST HER PICTURES WITH THE CONTEST ENTRY. OH! WELL... WE BOTH SMILED ABOUT IT... YOU POETS DID NOTHING WRONG.. SHE HAS DEEPER TASTE.. THAT IS ALL.. HAVE A LOVELY DAY..PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2012 12:02:00 PM

HUMM!! I'M READING THE COMMENT BELOW. IT IS SAD MANY DID NOT GET PLACED. YOURS WAS EXCELLENT KASH. HOWEVER I DON'T THINK MY SISTER WAS LOOKING FOR PERFECTION. I THINK SHE WAS LOOKING FOR PLEASURE. WE HAVE DIFFERENT TASTE, I THINK. I'M GLAD TO SEE SHE LIKED IT. ... CONGRATULATIONS.. ALWAYS...PD

Joseph May

Date: 4/25/2012 5:54:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/25/2012 3:41:00 AM

awwwight, kashi... should have been placed higher for me... congrats with huggs! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/24/2012 11:47:00 PM

Life on the small scale of a hummingbird..delightful and adoring! Rainbow wings and a breakfast table filled with nectar! Here u go again! Winner! Ding ding ding! Enjoyed much...Love, Gwendolen

Skat A

Date: 4/24/2012 9:51:00 PM

congrats with your wonderful win' Siddy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2012 7:16:00 PM

Not all of them are "real" haiku by strict definition (I know how you are about haiku!) but WOW, I think they are all amazing, particularly the second one and the last one. These are some of the best I have seen in the contest,Kash. Well done!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/24/2012 9:16:00 AM

Kash, you have such delightful and creatively worded images in your haiku. Your writing skills are growing by leaps and bounds. I especially like the comparison of humming bird wings to tiny rainbows. They DO like that way. This wonderful poem ranks high in my book. Winning wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/24/2012 6:05:00 AM

The season of spring appears to be in full bloom in these beautiful Haikus. The combination of spring and rainbow has made it more lovely and beautiful. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your kind comments on my new series Poem. I do take pleasure in conveying to those, who have little or no idea about the noteworthy things of our culture. Thank you for your views and support. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Kash Poet.