The Preacher's Son

A lonely figure twirls itself, concealed
by blades of wheat as clouds float through the sky.
The form, a boy, looks up from golden field
and sees the clouds as wedges of cream pie.

He hides despair as if it were that wart
beneath his sleeve.  A no-fuss, lonesome lad,
he thinks of things most wonderful to thwart
forlornness. . . He rehearses being glad.

Skipping to the thicket, near a brier,
he spies some lovely flowers; standing there
he uses the demeanor of his sire,
pretends to hold a Bible, thumps the air. . .

and preaching to forget-me-nots, the boy
imagines what might be. . . imagines joy.


For Chris' Anything goes!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Looks like my comment on this gem has disappeared so I'll leave another. "He rehearses being glad"; such a poignant statement. I know this is one of your favorites, and for good reason. I wonder if this is based upon someone you knew, or maybe a movie character.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 4:29 PM
I made this one up too but I've seen plenty of movies about the sons of preacher men and how some of them turn out !!
Yvonne Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 5:36 PM
So good this one is, you write such a variety of topics. Fav.
Puddifoot Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 2:13 PM
this is a very interesting sonnet, andrea, I love the line about seeing the clouds as wedges of cream pie! congrats on your win in chris' contest :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Fantastic! one of my personal favorites for the contest.
May Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 11:50 AM
I love the forget-me-nots line....congrats on your win
A. Sharma Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 6:02 AM
Wonderful as always Andrea ! Congrats on ur fine win !!
Walker  Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 3:22 AM
Lovely poem Andrea... congratulations on winning in the contest... Velrna
A  Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 10:56 PM
Andrea, lovely win, love ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations on a fine win on your wonderful piece of poetry, Andrea
A   Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Hey, Andrea, this is awesome... love it... Congratulations.. Linda
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April 12, 2014 at 6:14 PM
I was just telling my friend Faye Gibson to check out your sonnets. (She is the one I introduced in my latest blog) I had commented on one of hers and told her I had nick-named you 'The Sonnet Queen of the Soup'...This is a perfect example of why...Congrats! - Tim-----PS: I wonder what your inspiration for this was?
Callus Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Congrats Andrea on win. Beautiful sonnet with a great finale:) // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 2:28 PM
This is so good, you could be writing about Billy Graham's son. I love the mood you created with this piece. Congratulations.
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Your Choice Once More" contest *Andrea*. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 6:42 PM
Andrea, another stunning poem. I am going to have to step my game up to compete with you. Awesome job and congrats for making Brian's winners' list........S.Ronthorpe
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Congrats on your winning work..I knew it was a winner..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 9:19 AM
congrats Andrea on a dynamite first place win luv.. this piece is so awesome ..
Rozario Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:05 AM
This one is going straight to my favorite section...congrats on your 1st place Andrea.
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February 19, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Andrea.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with ANOTHER wonderfuL win... ~ always*PD
Song Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 6:45 PM
Like father like son...the best part about this poem is that it's true..the son really does want to be like his dad...sweet images in your winning write!! So tickles to see it in the top spot. ps...yes, we are in Indian country here in Ohio..located near Fort Ancient the famous burial grounds...and in my immediate area is where the Miami Indians settled...a pretty cool Indian mound. 150 steps one way up...talk about a butt burner!! You'd love the lil workout..legs like noodles in under 10 minutes. ha ha. Love, Gwendolen
Guzzi Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Great choice..unique sonnet lovely as always. Congrad's Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 4:10 PM
Wonderful writing. Congratulations on another big win. Love, Joyce
Scholtz Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write Andrea, and thank you for my placement in your contest, love Elizabeth
Hunt Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 4:39 PM
From the son of a preacher man, this is great:) R.M.
Fullick Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 12:17 AM
Yes I saw so much and so much more, it is a lot to handle and I have a life poem about it I am going to post about the expiriance. But your poem took the lid off some memorys in a good way.Thank you, the last electronic heart beat was about my nan and listening to the heart monitor as it sounded its last electronic bleep.. Thank you so much for reading.
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