The Power of Love (Part 2)

The Second Day Like gravity pull From one pole to the other The attraction of opposites True law of nature. The Force of oneness Parts the inner, the outer The male, the female, bond in True Love from above. Life, born in the sea Line never to be severed Multiplies with opposites Image of the Force. Bed of water Womb, fed by love and nature To bring forth the miracle Of new, higher life. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 04.26.10

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2010 12:20:00 PM

The exploration of the entire creation process is coming together nicely in your chokas, Caroline. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2010 9:41:00 PM

WEll, this is also very good, you are in a great poetic mood with these. I will save the last for later, since I see you have no other new posts! LUv, andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 4/30/2010 9:07:00 PM

Just as wonderful as number 1...enjoyed...now headed for part 3...Marty

David Byrne

Date: 4/30/2010 5:20:00 PM

looking good!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/30/2010 1:15:00 PM

Yes, Caroline!...Now I see the Book of Genesis here? (how long is one day to God?) Whether I misinterpret or not...Please continue this fascinating series! - Tim

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/30/2010 7:32:00 AM

Nicely penned and powerful, Caroline! Gefaellt mir gut! Vielen Dank fuer die Kommentare! Hope you'll be having a good weekend...All the best...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 4/28/2010 8:41:00 AM

The harmony of the Agape paradox, Love it Caroline, keep up this awesome, work. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2010 7:18:00 AM

Thoughtful and beautiful poetry, Caroline....the joining of the forces of love, unstoppable, creating the miracle of life! Love, Carrie

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/27/2010 9:28:00 PM

Beautiful Part 1 and Part 2 but why did you use two different forms of poetry, I wonder... Thanks for your comment: it's a very hungry caterpillar and I am the leaf :( ...for Raul's contest on that picture. Love, Iolanda