The Portrait

Standing in the garden facing the four o’clock sun,
the roses drawn up to their full height, 
you approach me from behind, press a piece
of paper and a pencil in my hand and ask me

to draw you a picture. I hold the translucent
sheet up to the light and traced the scene
which slowly soaks through, the proudest
rose bending at its apex due to weight of

its oversized pink blossom, petals spread
by the onset of autumn and swaying gently
in the breeze.  Above it, the soft glow of the
sun seemingly just inches away.

Between them, the silhouettes of distant
evergreens cut across at a slight angle.
Satisfied that there’s nothing left to
capture, I scrawl “The Confession” across
 
the top of it and hand it back to you.
With a grateful smile, you fold it in three
And slide it into your back pocket before
anointing the rose with your green watering can.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 17, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Good morning , Darryl... This is very pretty... Lovely image... The canvas must have Been such a worthy keep.. Followed every line.... enjoyed your portrait of words...always...pd
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January 12, 2012 at 5:37 PM
that what people do.
Nair Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 8:39 AM
I have gone thru' all the three poems posted and find them unique with their interesting imagery and effortless flow..thnx for stopping by..
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December 19, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Beautiful poem Darryl,I love it. OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise
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