The Porch Light

The loneliness is pervasive at home
Noise of the television can't drown it
The emptiness happens each time you roam
I'll turn the porch light on and a moth will flit 

While up, open the window just a bit
Now sounds of the night and traffic clearer
In the distance your truck's clank transmits 
With each moth flit, the engine's noise nearer

Wonderful knowing you are home and safe
Delighted that you're here again child
Let me close the window, hug the waif
Closing it, remember when you once smiled

The moth no longer flits to the porch light
A closed window blocks the sounds of the night

Inspired by Craig Cornish's
Chopped II
Written: November 07, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:24 AM
What a beautiful write Sara ! i happen to rhyme wid u on this lovely sonnet!
Broodryk Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 12:57 AM
stunning poetry. thanks
Meade Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 9:01 AM
How dark the silence is when your child is out . . . great poem my friend.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Wonderful, Sara! I can feel the love of a mother waiting up for her child. The worrying never ends...love and blessings :)
Yvonne Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 6:38 AM
I love the take on this challenge. A beautifully written Sonnet.
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