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The Porch Light

The loneliness is pervasive at home Noise of the television can't drown it The emptiness happens each time you roam I'll turn the porch light on and a moth will flit While up, open the window just a bit Now sounds of the night and traffic clearer In the distance your truck's clank transmits With each moth flit, the engine's noise nearer Wonderful knowing you are home and safe Delighted that you're here again child Let me close the window, hug the waif Closing it, remember when you once smiled The moth no longer flits to the porch light A closed window blocks the sounds of the night Inspired by Craig Cornish's Chopped II Written: November 07, 2014

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Date: 11/8/2014 4:24:00 AM
What a beautiful write Sara ! i happen to rhyme wid u on this lovely sonnet!
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Date: 11/8/2014 12:57:00 AM
stunning poetry. thanks
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Date: 11/7/2014 9:01:00 AM
How dark the silence is when your child is out . . . great poem my friend.
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Date: 11/7/2014 8:03:00 AM
Wonderful, Sara! I can feel the love of a mother waiting up for her child. The worrying never ends...love and blessings :)
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Date: 11/7/2014 6:38:00 AM
I love the take on this challenge. A beautifully written Sonnet.
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