The Pond

the pond is full of laughing skaters - - beneath the ice, a fish watches Date: 9th May Name of Challenge: cinqku contest sponsor: Dear Heart Constance

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Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2019 9:56:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem. I found it quite delightful!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2019 3:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 6:27:00 PM

Back with my congrats. I remember this one well.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/10/2019 6:19:00 AM

I never thought of looking from a fish's point of view, Jack! Quite creative. Regards // paul

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/9/2019 8:13:00 PM

This is so different. A lot of magic happening in those few words. Best of luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2019 6:28:00 PM

wow, that is amazingly good, Jack. Wow!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/9/2019 4:27:00 PM

I wonder what kind of fish. It has raised a question so a very good poem. Thanks for dropping by. Sara