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For you are a different kind of man; crimson dancing silhouettes caressing the night- cerulean ecstasy with a medallion dandelion wish, you sacrifice your light for me and now my wings can soar in the sky. When I first met you there were a hundred pieces of me. When love takes hold, the Lord and His angels bestow a heartbeat of a dream. Meditation in the morning with you; writing on life’s wall for love’s sweet surrender. Forgotten scars find peace.... and so it begins- words worth writing; for never a part time poet am I. My muse once sleeping is awake... ~poetry you and me~ Poem titles: (I used 1 more title, I didn't realize it until after) 1.) Different Kind of Man- Richard Lamoureux 2.) Dancing Silhouettes- Charles Messina 3.) Caressing the Night-Frederic Parker 4.) Cerulean Ecstasy- Subimal Sinha-Roy 5.) Dandelion Wish- Nette Onclaud 6.) Sacrifice Your Light For Me-Gregory Barden 7.) Now My Wings Can Soar in the Sky- Eve Roper 8.) When I First Met You-Curtis Moorman 9.) A Hundred Pieces of Me- Dear Heart 10.) When Love Takes Hold- Emile Pinet 11.) The Lord and His Angels- Jo Daniel 12.) Heartbeat of a Dream- Carrie Richards 13.) Meditation in the Morning- Caren Krutsinger 14.) Writing on Life's Wall-Suzette Richards 15.) Love's Sweet Surrender- Alexis Y. 16.) Forgotten Scars- John Hamilton 17.) And So it Begins- Joseph May 18.) Words Worth Writing- Reason A. Poteet 19.) A Part Time Poet am I- Beata Agustin 20.) My Muse Once Sleeping is Awake- Tania Kitchin 21.) Poetry You and Me- Line Gauthier ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Form: 20 titles from 20 friends Date written: July 18, 2019

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Date: 8/9/2019 8:16:00 PM
Hi Laura, You did a great job picking 20 titles from your soup friends. Well done on this lovely and romantic write. I am honored that you chose one of my titles. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/2/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your second place win. Hugs Rick.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 2:34:00 PM
thank you so much! I am honored dear man ;)-luloo
Date: 8/1/2019 6:56:00 PM
Wonderful Lu. So easy you made this look. Never would have known it was using titles if it weren't for the contest. Congrats on your fine placement.Thank you also for using my title...honored and humbled. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 8/9/2019 2:34:00 PM
awww of course I used one of yours. You are gifted...thank you :)-luloo
Date: 8/1/2019 5:09:00 PM
Lovely poem, Lu Loo. Congrats on your podium finish and thanks for using one of my poem titles.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 2:34:00 PM
of course! You write with such ease :) thank you :)-luloo
Date: 8/1/2019 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Laura, I'm honored you used one of mine!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 2:35:00 PM
and I always use "scars" in my poems lol ,loved the name :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 2:33:00 PM
of course I did! You were one of the first I looked at! Loved that poem I used that you wrote. You inspire me ;) -luloo
Date: 8/1/2019 1:16:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place on the winning list ... great done, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 2:32:00 PM
many thanks sweet Smile :) I appreciate it -luloo :)
Date: 7/21/2019 12:05:00 PM
You weaved the titles well...Enjoyed it...
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 2:32:00 PM
thank you dear Arturo :)-luloo
Date: 7/19/2019 2:40:00 PM
Love the lines And so it begins Words worth writting For never a part time poet am i
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2019 3:05:00 PM
thank you! sorry for delayed response, sometimes I accidently overlook comment by mistake. I just read yours and it made me smile, thank you :)-luloo

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