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The Poetess and Her Conundrum

The Poetess...... Suffered in angst and deep loneliness, As her Jasmine poetry was anew and just growing. “What good are my poems regarding truthfulness or honesty? Against seas of deceitful poems, puff-pretty, bright glowing?” The sweet,pre-spring rains came and gave not a whisp of an answer. Her soul and stomach did crave some reprise. “No, no, rest, dear poetess, “words whispered came in the form of a ballet dancer. Then..what to do, she most freely wept? “Stop looking for readers of my poems?” Ah, a wondrous secret being kept? “Stop, stop”, the laughing dancer said. “Each poem you wrote once slept in the soft bed of your heart.” “Let it begone, and like a newborn butterfly... alight with freedom and depart.” 3-15-2022

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Date: 3/15/2022 10:09:00 PM
Mindful thoughts of deep concern, Pangie. As poets, we never know how others will react or comment on our efforts. All we can do is share what we feel and hope they're others out there that resonate with some of the words that pass through us. Write On! my friend, Bill
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/16/2022 8:29:00 AM
A great summation, Bill. Yes we do hope they resonate.....with the enormous number of poets, a few might or more depending on your activity level here. Iknow your level is quite vast. Good for you. A moving reply,,, love, Panagiota xoxo
Date: 3/15/2022 5:27:00 PM
Well said my friend. Many fine writers feel afraid to let their gift be seen because they fear being laughed at or that others may not like what they write. Never hide your light under a bushel. Let it shine so others may enjoy it it too. Good stuff my friend. God Bess, JB
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/16/2022 8:22:00 AM
Hope your day goes well, Judy. Am thinking of you today! You make a point! Publishing an unpopular idea takes courage. Being funny is easier! Addressing the human Condition is another story. I know when a poem is born in a soul, or a thesaurus. Souls impress me...never words. Sounds odd? There are soul poems and non soul poems.I like honesty in poetry. May His Sons words, inspire you. Love, Pangie xoxo

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