The Poems I Never Wrote

The poems I never wrote are exquisite
Deep clear pools that reflect and reveal their readers
Nuanced and subtle, full of symbols and hidden meaning
Peeling back new layers upon each return

The poems I never wrote are bestsellers
Attenborough voiceovers and roadhouse storytellers 
On bedside tables, dog-eared and marked up
The subject of disagreements over coffee house scones

The poems I never wrote are a perfect sigh
Lyrical, rolling off the tongue, effortless as breathing
Resolved with delight on the final line
Lacking nothing, possessed of no excess

The poems I never wrote are an enigma
An unanswered question desirous of much
A doorway into a new world fraught with possibility
Mysterious and unresolved, yet satisfyingly so

This is not one of those

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Written on 10/06/022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Very cool Jeff - a poem is a wish the heart makes - to paraphrase a favorite childhood song! Congratulations on your win! Craig has high standards and I am so happy for you with his placement. Blessings. Hope you are doing well. Continued prayers. Blessings!
Kyser Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 10:24 AM
I am doing well, thanks! I appreciate the gracious comments and the read!
Rose  Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 9:44 PM
lol this is too cool, congrats Jeff on your first place win
Kyser Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Thanks so much, for the read and the encouragement!
Ligon Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:38 PM
This is really clever. Congratulations on your placement!
Kyser Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 7:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate it!
Lawless Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 4:44 AM
Jeff, that last line could be the segue to the sequel contest entitled....you guessed it.....This is not one of those.....great write and well deserved (IMNSHO) top spot.
Kyser Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 7:01 PM
Might get some good turnout? Interesting how some topics really turn the juices on. Thanks, John!
Seeker Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Witty ending! Enjoyed the entire poem ~ ‘ ‘Lacking nothing, possessed of no excess’ ~ congrats on your top win, Jeff
Kyser Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 4:06 AM
If only, lol, thanks for the read and comments!
Watt Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:26 PM
Jeff, very nice riffing on the theme. Enjoyed every line, especially the Deep "clear pools that reflect and reveal their readers"; a desire for every serious composer of poetry. I like your style of free verse: lacking rhyme and strict meter, but not lacking the pattern of 4-lined stanzas and the 6-word motif at the beginning of each one. And I agree with Ilene's assessment of your final line. Congrats on your top win ~ John
Kyser Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 4:05 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful read and comments, John. I may still be leaning towards sonnets, there with my free verse…
Peck Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 1:50 PM
HaHa - love your ending line especially. You are just so clever, Jeff! A wordmaster for sure. Congratulations on first place!
Kyser Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Thank you, Ann! I do enjoy word play and having fun with the words
Faulkner Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Very clever and astute, congratulations on your first place win-
Chunn Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Nice one Jeff.....congratulations! You captured all of us quite well.
Kyser Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 4:06 AM
Thanks, Andy, much appreciated!
Poet Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Jeff, Congratulations on your contest's top win. You amply deserve it with your great poem. This a fave for me.
Kyser Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 10:29 AM
You're very kind - thanks, and glad you enjoyed it!
La France Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Jeff, a great free verse poem full of what if's I wrote that thoughts, and congratulations on your top win in the Craig's contest, blessings Constance
Kyser Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Thanks, Constance, I still don't think I understand free verse very well, but I will keep at it!
Dutta Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 7:26 AM
BIG Congrats to win TOP focused on wonderful ideas.. Have Good Days
Kyser Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Oh, wow! Didn't really expect that - thanks, and a blessed day to you as well!
Krolis Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 12:49 PM
I really really like this, the whole idea is sooo powerful
Bauer Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 2:09 PM
ha! great poem, jeff, with the absolutely most PERFECT ending!
Kyser Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Thanks, Ilene! I really appreciate that!
Hankins Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Jeff, if this is not THE winner, I'll be surprised. This is so good. A FAVE for me!
Kyser Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Wow, thanks! That was a fun write. Even got me to try more free verse :-)
Slaughter Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 10:21 AM
Gee, Jeff, I believe I never wrote some of those same poems. I love this piece.
Kyser Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Thanks,Jim, fun write!
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