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The Poem In Mind Upon Waking

trapped in a diamond mine yet try to pan gold creates a dust cloud whilst I store my silver in a cloth to find it blackened if only I knew the power of the palm of my hand and opening my eyes

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Date: 11/4/2023 1:29:00 PM
interesting poem...I assume this poem was what you created when you first work up??? The last verse was indicative of the power we have the moment we wake up. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Date: 11/4/2023 1:40:00 PM
Yes, just sentences going through my head - it's nice to capture sometimes little messages from dreams, thanks for reading and commenting x

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