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Find a place where you can be alone, turn down the volume. Wait. Go through the rituals, perhaps recall a phrase that has been playing on the mind, shadows cast by a mood, the taste of lips still sweet from long ago, the leftovers from a hurt. Listen quietly. Don't move. Soon it will begin to speak. Give it room to wander the page, to take whatever it needs from your memory, your heart. Feel it rub a nerve and rummage the dictionary of the head. Let some inner drum gently beat a rhythm to time the music of the words. Treat whoever it is as an honored guest. Give of yourself. When it goes, it will leave you a precious gift. Pick it up, feel its heartbeat, read what it has to say. Hold it close for awhile with all of its imperfections and faults as if it's a child of your soul. Give it a name. Then, you will have to let it go.

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:33:00 PM
It is like gathering all the ingredients for a spell. Enjoyed reading and relating to this one, Paul, I especially liked,” Give it room to wander. Best, SuZ
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/6/2023 9:19:00 PM
Sorry Suzanne, I thought I had sent a reply to your kind comments earlier, probably a case of typing fingers acting independently of brain. Anyhow, a belated thankyou, always value your comments. Paul
Date: 4/2/2023 11:44:00 PM
Interesting, I wonder if we are all different. I should take away the idea of using one thought and don't shove the whole narrative of my chaos brain on one single sheet of (virtual) paper and then wonder why it's disjointed haha. I might try sticking to one thought - I suppose it's a version of mindfulness too
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for your comments, very much appreciate the time you have given to thinking about it all. Sometimes you got to accept whatever comes out of that inspired moment then you can decide what to keep. I think we all have some differences in the writing process...aim isvto get one down on paper. Take care.
Date: 4/2/2023 6:13:00 PM
You have given us such great instruction, what a wonderful way to look at a poem Paul :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thankyou for your comments.., not sure if it's a common experience but writing a poem always seems to involve a little magic. We keep repeating the process as if trying to create something perfect that says it all....impossible of course. Regards, Paul
Date: 4/2/2023 7:26:00 AM
YUP....I just sit with a cuppa coffeand and tell the muse "FETCH".....she brings back some very interesting things. Beautiful take on the "art" of the poetic quest.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 5:09:00 AM
I like your the way you go about it...FETCH !. Trouble is, mine just ignore my commands. Maybe I need to be a liittle more firm. Thanks John for your comments and taking the time to read.
Date: 4/2/2023 7:01:00 AM
Another good read, Paul. It's kind of funny, although we all write. we go about it in different ways. The hardest part for me is getting started, finding something to talk about. I like your take. Have a wonderful evening, I guess it is there.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. I guess we all have a method for wringing out a poem...they seem, however, to decide when. The minute you start to force one into existence, it begins to fall apart. Cheers, Paul

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