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There will be a day Where I will wake up in the morning And you will be here, With the scent of fresh Exhilaration in your hair, And the look of Wild pleasure in your eyes. In your hands, so strong, Veins like frail cables Tell a story by rolling expressively While you gesture with wide Movements. In the protection of your legs My frame can relax. I rest my objections, Give over my doubts. In the pleasure of your voice I am silent and smile, Oh see me smile.

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Date: 3/20/2017 9:42:00 PM
Oh Darren, this is so beautiful :-) The tenderness of your lovely words conveys such vulnerability and love, I felt shivers (good one's :-)) I love the title and I really love how your poem begins 'as if it is true'...not merely If it will happen...only When.:-) Exceptional writing. a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 12:53:00 AM
Wow Lynn, thank you so very much for all of the compliments, the 7 and the fav!! <3
Date: 3/20/2017 8:34:00 PM
A beautiful poem full of love and hope <3
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Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 12:52:00 AM
Yeah, my friend <3
Date: 3/20/2017 4:19:00 PM
Like Tim and Chris said smiles are on the way. Darren this is so beautiful!!
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Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 12:52:00 AM
Thanks Carol, here is a smile :)
Date: 3/20/2017 3:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Darren and like Tim says...smiles are on the way.
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Darren White
Date: 3/20/2017 4:04:00 PM
:) you two are perfectly optimistic. It works!
Date: 3/20/2017 3:18:00 PM
You will be smiling before you know it.
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Darren White
Date: 3/20/2017 3:20:00 PM
I so hope you will be right :)

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