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The Playground

We are all in the devil's playground, now watch as I breach over and hold on to God's hand real tight. ~ #1. The underground is never lonely, to many hot dates. #2. The host and the guest never seem to rest. #3. The light will always shine upon my soul, no matter the shadow. ~ BY; PD

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Dominic Amezimi

Date: 11/5/2015 2:27:00 PM

your mind travels for sure, i can see that here.

Kamran Rashid

Date: 10/19/2014 8:36:00 AM

oll i could fgr out while reading ua write is faith n hope is wot nva dies n kp soulz alive..if thy die thy oll bcm wot i call them burningsoulz...#apowerful write n a new way to put it out,,,lovd reading ua thoughts frm the days m here on soup PD..

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/18/2013 3:03:00 PM

I have never read a poem written in this form before. It is very interesting and gives the reader a lot to ponder! And, I can understand the struggle between the light and the dark. I especially loved the last line! Wonderful work, Linda!...Thank you so much for commenting kindly on my poem!

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/14/2013 10:30:00 AM

Some optimism, after all!

Gordon Andrews

Date: 5/3/2013 8:56:00 PM

By the sounds of it The Host and PD shines a light on Everyone's soul And never rests

Carl Fraser

Date: 5/3/2013 8:34:00 PM

No shadows around you Linda, gods hangin on tightly to people like you, great wisdom conveyed here, blessings, Carl

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/3/2013 1:16:00 AM

Yes, the host and guest never rest in the underground of the playground, lol!! Jag

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/2/2013 2:42:00 PM

PD....you shine brighter than most! Hope you have been well. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2013 1:36:00 AM

Hello my everdearest sis! I'm stopping by again to read this great & excellent monoku of yours. I'm embracing it once again & u. Thank you so much for sharing again ( I love it & I enjoy as always), your congratulatory comments on my poem and especially your sweet message. I miss you,too. I'm sorry, I just came now because I've just borrowed my brother's PC ;)). I left mine in BKK. Again, million thanks & biggest sweetest hugs! Love 4evr, Leonora

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/30/2013 8:47:00 AM

It's God gifted poem, a spiritual philosophy indeed. Loved the last line much and much. My favorite poem too. Thanks........, loved always, bl

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 4/29/2013 12:45:00 PM

Amen! Short and to the point, enjoyed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2013 12:21:00 PM

very intriguing-- yup better hold on tight-- unique way of using breach-- and yup, I think you would have a fun time with that pay back-- now umm as for the not sleeping part-- I am in the same boat? I better sleep in a bit-- relaxing tips? got some chocolate?? that's good you're busy though--;)

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/29/2013 8:29:00 AM

Hold that hand !

Donna Jones

Date: 4/29/2013 6:57:00 AM

Good thing He is always reaching more than half way...sometimes all it takes for Him to come to us is ..to catch our tears...beautiful Linda....

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/29/2013 6:45:00 AM

PD...just stoppin by to say, HOWDY!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/28/2013 8:26:00 PM

Linda....Loved the first two lines...absolutely exquisite! :) The play on words in #1 is amazing! ;) Great write! Hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/28/2013 8:28:00 PM

BTW....I can't thank you enough for your post on Richard's dedication poem. Hurricane Eileen! You are just so sweet and kind, PD! I'm touched and uplifted. I commented on that...if you have time to circle back to it! HUGS GALORE!

Ale A A

Date: 4/28/2013 5:40:00 PM

It took me a few reads but in the end I decided that this is a poem of hope. And I love anything that brings hope into my life.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/28/2013 12:18:00 PM

Interesting conception. I like the comparatives. Well written.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/28/2013 7:56:00 AM

well as usual i'm eons behind every one else,, yet that does not lessen the impact, of the comment,, you are unique there is no doubt about that,, your poetry and you move me!!!!!!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 12:57:00 AM

hello, PD. how is it going down there in Texas?

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/27/2013 2:45:00 PM

Hey P D a real heartening write from your talented soul; a great joy to read today.."

Jack Jordan

Date: 4/27/2013 1:15:00 PM

Right to the heart of the matter... I find monoku difficult; not so you. Nice work, as always... Jack

Timothy Jacks

Date: 4/27/2013 12:04:00 PM

Momma lay my guns to ground, Uncle Sam said i can't shoot them anymore, There's a dark, dark cloud coming down, Oh my God! it's heavens door, 9 catfish head on the fence there, Why in the hell did i ever fight this war, Maybe God will give me Wisdom one day, I don't know I prayed for it since i was 4, my brothers on the ground he's dying bleeding to death, I just killed him I'm carrying a sword, I look down, I'm ashamed now, why in the hell did I ever fight this war! War is the devil's party

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/26/2013 2:32:00 PM

Dear Linda, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healing Healthy, and Happy. I am Holding God's hand, YOU are holding God's hand, therefore I am Holding YOUR Hand, helping me hang on to the LIGHT. Our shadows are Golden reminders of God's Grace. A beautiful set of Monoku. Easy to understand the Power of God. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Loyal Liege...HG - Soup Mail Call

Betty Bateson

Date: 4/26/2013 8:23:00 AM

I love this. I have put you on my fav list because I enjoy your work so much.