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We are all in the devil's playground, now watch as I breach over and hold on to God's hand real tight. ~ #1. The underground is never lonely, to many hot dates. #2. The host and the guest never seem to rest. #3. The light will always shine upon my soul, no matter the shadow. ~ BY; PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/5/2015 2:27:00 PM
your mind travels for sure, i can see that here.
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Date: 10/19/2014 8:36:00 AM
oll i could fgr out while reading ua write is faith n hope is wot nva dies n kp soulz alive..if thy die thy oll bcm wot i call them burningsoulz...#apowerful write n a new way to put it out,,,lovd reading ua thoughts frm the days m here on soup PD..
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Date: 9/18/2013 3:03:00 PM
I have never read a poem written in this form before. It is very interesting and gives the reader a lot to ponder! And, I can understand the struggle between the light and the dark. I especially loved the last line! Wonderful work, Linda!...Thank you so much for commenting kindly on my poem!
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Date: 5/14/2013 10:30:00 AM
Some optimism, after all!
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:56:00 PM
By the sounds of it The Host and PD shines a light on Everyone's soul And never rests
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:34:00 PM
No shadows around you Linda, gods hangin on tightly to people like you, great wisdom conveyed here, blessings, Carl
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Date: 5/3/2013 1:16:00 AM
Yes, the host and guest never rest in the underground of the playground, lol!! Jag
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Date: 5/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
PD....you shine brighter than most! Hope you have been well. Hugs
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Date: 5/2/2013 1:36:00 AM
Hello my everdearest sis! I'm stopping by again to read this great & excellent monoku of yours. I'm embracing it once again & u. Thank you so much for sharing again ( I love it & I enjoy as always), your congratulatory comments on my poem and especially your sweet message. I miss you,too. I'm sorry, I just came now because I've just borrowed my brother's PC ;)). I left mine in BKK. Again, million thanks & biggest sweetest hugs! Love 4evr, Leonora
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Date: 4/30/2013 8:47:00 AM
It's God gifted poem, a spiritual philosophy indeed. Loved the last line much and much. My favorite poem too. Thanks........, loved always, bl
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Date: 4/29/2013 12:45:00 PM
Amen! Short and to the point, enjoyed.
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Date: 4/29/2013 12:21:00 PM
very intriguing-- yup better hold on tight-- unique way of using breach-- and yup, I think you would have a fun time with that pay back-- now umm as for the not sleeping part-- I am in the same boat? I better sleep in a bit-- relaxing tips? got some chocolate?? that's good you're busy though--;)
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Date: 4/29/2013 8:29:00 AM
Hold that hand !
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:57:00 AM
Good thing He is always reaching more than half way...sometimes all it takes for Him to come to us is ..to catch our tears...beautiful Linda....
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:45:00 AM
PD...just stoppin by to say, HOWDY!
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Date: 4/28/2013 8:26:00 PM
Linda....Loved the first two lines...absolutely exquisite! :) The play on words in #1 is amazing! ;) Great write! Hugs!
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Date: 4/28/2013 8:28:00 PM
BTW....I can't thank you enough for your post on Richard's dedication poem. Hurricane Eileen! You are just so sweet and kind, PD! I'm touched and uplifted. I commented on that...if you have time to circle back to it! HUGS GALORE!
Date: 4/28/2013 5:40:00 PM
It took me a few reads but in the end I decided that this is a poem of hope. And I love anything that brings hope into my life.
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Date: 4/28/2013 12:18:00 PM
Interesting conception. I like the comparatives. Well written.
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:57:00 AM
I have never seen anything like this, PD! I freakin' love it! Gosh, you are such a rock star poet- keep it up!! :)
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:56:00 AM
well as usual i'm eons behind every one else,, yet that does not lessen the impact, of the comment,, you are unique there is no doubt about that,, your poetry and you move me!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 4/28/2013 12:57:00 AM
hello, PD. how is it going down there in Texas?
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Date: 4/27/2013 2:45:00 PM
Hey P D a real heartening write from your talented soul; a great joy to read today.."
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Date: 4/27/2013 1:15:00 PM
Right to the heart of the matter... I find monoku difficult; not so you. Nice work, as always... Jack
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Date: 4/27/2013 12:04:00 PM
Momma lay my guns to ground, Uncle Sam said i can't shoot them anymore, There's a dark, dark cloud coming down, Oh my God! it's heavens door, 9 catfish head on the fence there, Why in the hell did i ever fight this war, Maybe God will give me Wisdom one day, I don't know I prayed for it since i was 4, my brothers on the ground he's dying bleeding to death, I just killed him I'm carrying a sword, I look down, I'm ashamed now, why in the hell did I ever fight this war! War is the devil's party
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Date: 4/26/2013 2:32:00 PM
Dear Linda, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healing Healthy, and Happy. I am Holding God's hand, YOU are holding God's hand, therefore I am Holding YOUR Hand, helping me hang on to the LIGHT. Our shadows are Golden reminders of God's Grace. A beautiful set of Monoku. Easy to understand the Power of God. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Loyal Liege...HG - Soup Mail Call
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