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The Playground

Teeter-totter , seesaw , up and down all day Peter, Paul, and Esau, working hard at play Penny, Pam, and Patti, swinging as they sing Hear their lovely voices, ringing as they swing Up the ladder climbing, a little boy named Clyde Has such perfect timing, gliding down the slide The artist’s name is Brandi, in the box of sand Her castles’ fame is dandy known through out the land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/10/2012 1:30:00 PM
Loved the flow of this poem. It reminded me a bit of my childhood and moved my memory. (: Sweet one! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/25/2009 5:48:00 PM
This is an awesome lil poem. The lyrical flow , the words of motion and sound gives one who reaqds the glee of the children and your introductions start the friendships with the same, furtheer involving one with the experience/poem. Like it lots, HG
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:25:00 PM
I felt like I wanted to join them at play in The Playground... also have a poem with same title but not yet posted... enjoyed HG and hope to read more of your poetry... luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/25/2009 4:46:00 PM
this is great fun! HG! good work! my friend!... jim
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Date: 10/25/2009 8:48:00 AM
Lovely rhyme HG, this should be in a nursery rhyme book. Made me chuckle >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 9:12:00 PM
This is great rhyme,and brought back memories of going to the spielplotz with my Tunta Frieda! (playground) lol Thanks for the smiles! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/22/2009 5:59:00 PM
Wonderful and witty, my friend, a pleasure to read, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/22/2009 5:45:00 PM
cute. jhl
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Date: 10/22/2009 9:20:00 AM
My dear friend, you paint an oh - so - farmilar childhood memory with this lovely rhyme. I beleive many famous artists' began their careers in the sandbox. So nice to read your wonderful writing again and so nice to hear your kind comments on mine. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/21/2009 10:59:00 AM
lovely poem,,enjoyed it--Charma
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Date: 10/21/2009 3:56:00 AM
What a beautiful poem HG. A wonderful start to my day thank you my forever friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 3:25:00 PM
HG..This is just adorable..I think this may have to go to my fav's (which is full of your stuff). Lots of love..Barbeeg
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