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The Plaintive Song of a Stone

If I could but feel! I would feel the warmth of the sun upon my old, cold, featureless face.... If I could but touch, I'd touch the grass I lay on and revel in its texture like a little happy king.... If I could but smell, all the flowers of the world would be mine: roses and daisies and even orchids would be endless delight.... If I could but hear, then all nature would be my own symphony-- the birds rejoicing, the bees buzzing, dogs barking, even rolling thunder, all a continuous music to my soul.... If I could but see-- ah, what would a stone see? The ever breathing beauty of a world of color and life? Or would I see its slow and merciless unraveling by that other sentient being, burning its forests and dumping what cannot be dissolved in eons into proud, awesome oceans? But I would treasure my newfound mind and seek to thank the Being that could make even a stone see and feel and hear and think and even, in time, perhaps love.... O, how then I would pity those born with eyes and ears yet unable to see Life or hear God, living their lives scurrying about like blind, deaf and dumb rats while the eternal Light bathes all. [posted February, 2020]

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Date: 12/31/2022 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write LJ! :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/1/2023 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Linda--happy new year!
Date: 1/28/2022 12:40:00 AM
Great imagination. All inanimate beings might be feeling this, which, the human science, to some extent has proved it. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/31/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/19/2020 3:58:00 AM
This is just beautiful L.J. I am putting it into my Faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/19/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Connie!
Date: 6/18/2020 11:00:00 AM
Very nice L.J enjoyed this one a lot, congrats on a top win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/19/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you John, I am honored--vaya con Dios siempre, mi amigo...
Date: 2/21/2020 9:01:00 PM
You asked if my stone poem was on here. I found this long version of it: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/impressions_from_a_stone_skipped_on_water_913546
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/22/2020 8:17:00 AM
Thanks --I'll check it out
Date: 2/19/2020 7:54:00 PM
great imagination and equally great personification of a stone... oh if they had feelings and a voice, the things they could share with is... wonderful penning :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/20/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Sandra--you're making me blush!
Date: 2/13/2020 4:55:00 PM
Outstanding & a fave. I once wrote a personification of a stone!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/14/2020 9:30:00 AM
Cool, Andrea--did you post it on Soup?
Date: 2/11/2020 11:32:00 AM
The stone speaks eloquently in your poem--loved the message in your last stanza--lovely write, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/11/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Vijay-- I'm very happy you liked it!

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