The Plaintive Song of a Stone

If I could but feel!
I would feel the warmth 
of the sun upon my old,
cold, featureless face....

If I could but touch,
I'd touch the grass I lay on
and revel in its texture like
a little happy king....

If I could but smell,
all the flowers of the world
would be mine: roses and
daisies and even orchids
would be endless delight....

If I could but hear,
then all nature would be
my own symphony--
the birds rejoicing,
the bees buzzing,
dogs barking, even 
rolling thunder, all
a continuous music
to my soul....

If I could but see-- ah,
what would a stone see?
The ever breathing beauty
of a world of color and life?  
Or would I see its slow and
merciless unraveling by that
other sentient being, burning
its forests and dumping what
cannot be dissolved in eons
into proud, awesome oceans?

But I would treasure my 
newfound mind and seek
to thank the Being that 
could make even a stone
see and feel and hear and
think and even, in time,
perhaps love....

O, how then I would pity those 
born with eyes and ears yet
unable to see Life or hear God,
living their lives scurrying about 
like blind, deaf and dumb rats
while the eternal Light bathes all.



[posted February, 2020]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/31/2022 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write LJ! :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/1/2023 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Linda--happy new year!
Date: 1/28/2022 12:40:00 AM
Great imagination. All inanimate beings might be feeling this, which, the human science, to some extent has proved it. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/31/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/19/2020 3:58:00 AM
This is just beautiful L.J. I am putting it into my Faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/19/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Connie!
Date: 6/18/2020 11:00:00 AM
Very nice L.J enjoyed this one a lot, congrats on a top win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/19/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you John, I am honored--vaya con Dios siempre, mi amigo...
Date: 2/21/2020 9:01:00 PM
You asked if my stone poem was on here. I found this long version of it: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/impressions_from_a_stone_skipped_on_water_913546
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/22/2020 8:17:00 AM
Thanks --I'll check it out
Date: 2/19/2020 7:54:00 PM
great imagination and equally great personification of a stone... oh if they had feelings and a voice, the things they could share with is... wonderful penning :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/20/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Sandra--you're making me blush!
Date: 2/13/2020 4:55:00 PM
Outstanding & a fave. I once wrote a personification of a stone!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/14/2020 9:30:00 AM
Cool, Andrea--did you post it on Soup?
Date: 2/11/2020 11:32:00 AM
The stone speaks eloquently in your poem--loved the message in your last stanza--lovely write, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/11/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Vijay-- I'm very happy you liked it!
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