The Pink Evening Sky

The luminous winds of the sky
are love-coated with passion.
Passion hidden in solitude,
concealed for eternity,
under heaven's rules.
The everlasting jubilation
of freedom doesn't compare
to our God-given air.
The mid-lightened setting,
of the days aftermath,
which mesmerizes many-a-people
weakened by the desperation of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/21/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Orlando in Rick's contest "The Pink Evening Sky". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:50:00 PM
Hi Orlando - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Kory (KC)
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations Orlando on your worthy poem's top ten place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful comparison and so true. Many congrat’s , dear Orlando, on your big win, Elaine
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Orlando-- nikko :)
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:16:00 PM
Awesome poem, Orlando and a big congrats to you in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:24:00 PM
Many congrats on your fine win in Rick's contest Orlando....:)
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Date: 2/2/2011 1:03:00 PM
thank you for the comments and wonderful remarks on my poetry.
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Orlando
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:12:00 AM
Congrats Orlando on your big win in this contest!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
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Date: 2/1/2011 8:17:00 PM
Congrats Orlando on your wonderful win in the Pink Sky contest with this beautiful entry luv... enjoy your sweet success and top ten win with luv..
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:31:00 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:22:00 PM
This looks like a good entry for the new contest. One item: in your eighth line, "god-given" should be spelled with a capital G.
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