The Pink Evening Sky

The luminous winds of the sky
are love-coated with passion.
Passion hidden in solitude,
concealed for eternity,
under heaven's rules.
The everlasting jubilation
of freedom doesn't compare
to our God-given air.
The mid-lightened setting,
of the days aftermath,
which mesmerizes many-a-people
weakened by the desperation of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win Orlando in Rick's contest "The Pink Evening Sky". Love, Carol
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February 4, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Hi Orlando - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Kory (KC)
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February 3, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Freeman Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations Orlando on your worthy poem's top ten place. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Wonderful comparison and so true. Many congrat’s , dear Orlando, on your big win, Elaine
K. Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 1:06 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Orlando-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Awesome poem, Orlando and a big congrats to you in the contest. LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 3:24 PM
Many congrats on your fine win in Rick's contest Orlando....:)
Leach Jr. Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 1:03 PM
thank you for the comments and wonderful remarks on my poetry.
Mehta Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Orlando
Poet Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 4:12 AM
Congrats Orlando on your big win in this contest!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 8:17 PM
Congrats Orlando on your wonderful win in the Pink Sky contest with this beautiful entry luv... enjoy your sweet success and top ten win with luv..
Anderson Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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January 27, 2011 at 7:22 PM
This looks like a good entry for the new contest. One item: in your eighth line, "god-given" should be spelled with a capital G.
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