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I will remove the dust of time and decay, in a park by a clear blue lake; Oh, I have not been to this place of yesterday, but have heard about it over tea and cake. It was a Sunday tradition to pile in the car, I was told in family stories of old; there was food and grandpa played his guitar, and grandma said she picked wild marigold. In a park by a clear blue lake, I have black and white photos of that place; when, I look at them my heart does ache. all those faces smiling I want to embrace. They all came from here and there for a family picnic, arriving in those old, old cars so amazing; you had to arrive early to get your favorite spot pick, some would lay in the shade or in the sun blazing. In a park by a clear blue lake, family would gather to have fun on a summer day; and in storytelling everyone did partake, and after would drive home totally happy, tired and gay. _______________________________ February 28, 2020 Poetry/Ballad/The Picnic By A Lake Copyright Protected, ID 20-1231-001-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Back When sponsor, Line Gauthier Third Place

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Date: 3/26/2020 5:18:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Constance! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 3/26/2020 8:16:00 PM
Janice, thanks for the lovely and congrats _Constance
Date: 2/28/2020 3:45:00 PM
What a gorgeous memory, Constance. Your imagery so wonderful; what a terrific storyteller you are!
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Date: 2/28/2020 9:15:00 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting and for the compliment _Constance

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