?My limericks, with commentary, are collected in Original Clean Limericks, available from Amazon. See my book links.
The pi that’s of math has its day, But that of the baker, no way. Though both are quite round, Less merit is found, In pies that in stomachs do lay.
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.