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The Perfect Storm

THE PERFECT STORM He rode her with a passion, his tiller held high He commanded her, but; never once did own Calmed her ardent waters passion as subside With ferocity, allowed her to share his throne He commanded her, but; never once did own Forced within her; his very own perfect storm With ferocity, allowed her to share his throne By willingness and acceptance she transforms Forced within her; his very own perfect storm Waves ridden, until nothing but; waning ebbs By willingness and acceptance she transforms As into calmer waters, her riled passion heads Waves ridden, until nothing but; waning ebbs Steered by the tiller-man; in his direction lead As into calmer waters, her riled passion heads He has all but now; put this wild storm to bed Steered by the tiller-man; in his direction lead He was never, going to be browbeaten by she He has all but now; put this wild storm to bed Never fearing; his mission, in claiming this sea He was never, going to be browbeaten by she Calmed her ardent waters, passion as subside Never fearing; his mission, in claiming this sea He rode her, with a passion, his tiller held high Indiana Shaw . . . -_-

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Date: 3/4/2020 5:05:00 AM
Good write and flow
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 8/11/2021 9:01:00 PM
Cheers, Sekitto . . . : )
Date: 1/13/2020 12:09:00 PM
Perfect pantoum, have only written one, computer nearly went out the window lol. Tom
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/14/2020 9:21:00 PM
Cheers Tom, I seem to be getting a yen for them now . . . : )
Date: 1/13/2020 8:05:00 AM
Wow... lots of imagery, and power... lovely write. Ann
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/14/2020 9:18:00 PM
In all, a perfect storm . . . ; )

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