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The Perceiver

(*I dedicate this poem to Sylvia Plath on reading her life and works.) .
Oh, the wrinkled face makes me sad When I look my reflection into you. I know you are always true Without preconception And never change the reflection But swallow it as it is And present it to a person. Never mistaken and not giving false image Impartial, without love or hate to anyone. Some ugly people may accuse you Of being cruel and untruthful As you don’t glorify anything. To me you are God’s eye Always truthful and impartial With four dimensions.
+++++++ March 17, 2014 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Free Verse Seventh Place win Contest: Any Poem Goes # 14 by Linda PD

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Date: 3/31/2014 7:43:00 AM
awesome poem friend Ram, congratulations on your win on PD's contest. cheers ;)
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Date: 3/30/2014 12:36:00 AM
A mirror can never truly reflect who we really are. That can only be found inside of us. I really enjoyed reading your unique and beautiful poem, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:24:00 PM
Congrats Dr. A poem worthy of higher appreciation...and that final verse is great. // paul
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Date: 3/29/2014 12:27:00 PM
insightful piece literally. It was the same wrinkled look I saw from my grandson after I dumped him from his carrier to the floor on his face. A marvelous tribute to Ms. Plath.
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:29:00 AM
Lovely and wonderful piece..Great write and dedication..Congrats on your win....
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful write Dr Ram! Congrats on ur win !
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:08:00 AM
Hi Ram, Congrats on the win. Very perceptive write. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:01:00 AM
A beautiful dedication Dr Ram, congrats on the win
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Date: 3/29/2014 3:12:00 AM
Great thoughts SIR....Apnake Pronam janai...Salute to you for the truth....Sandip....
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Date: 3/29/2014 1:15:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations! Thank you for the support. Enjoy my latest blog if you like. It's called "Lunatics On The Loose." Stay tuned, I'll have a new contest coming up in a few days. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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