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The Pen

The pen The pen that hoards ten thousand words, seeks only guiding hand To spill it’s blood on virgin page, like entrails in the sand For thus the toil, at authors whim, drives quill to strive for gain That readers eye, or listening heart, might understand the pain The arteries of heartsblood, splashed upon those whitened fields Bear wounds and scars of battles fought, where wiser heart would yield No truce sought, nor quarter begged, the pen unlocks the word That Wielded in the skilful hand, cuts cleaner than the sword For wiser heads and stronger minds, have yielded to the might That bursts in fountains from the heart, and bleeds with words of light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round David. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:56:00 PM
D.W. - damn! this is really nice! the metaphor rhyme, and especially the poems cadence...just flow, great write man! ;-)
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations David on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congrats on being featured David. I loved this write first time round and still have it on my favs list. Best wishes to you Em :)
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:43:00 PM
Congrats David on your featured poem this week on PS. a great one to share with us all luv..
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Date: 3/23/2011 5:15:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning David. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 6:15:00 AM
This is MIGHTY....a Tuesday Morning wakeup call....Thank you....Excellent...
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Date: 3/22/2011 6:01:00 AM
David what a great write! Love the descriptions used. Writing does feel like bleeding sometimes! I agree with Barbara, if you get the chance, enter this in a contest it's a sure winner. 10/10. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 3/22/2011 5:36:00 AM
This is very, very good..nice rhymes and great thoughts. Save it for some contest in the future..Im sure it would be a winner. BG
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Date: 3/22/2011 5:32:00 AM
Love this very descriptive write. Love the analogies.
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