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'the Peccadillo of Others'

footpaths so many of them wondering what route would take him the closest if the effort put in would be worth it in the end would she be willing to trust him with her most precious gift a priceless one so delicate that need a little care that extra attention to start beating again he had no crystal ball he had no glimpse of the future all he had was his heart on his sleeve and the little ways to show her that not all of them are the same not all of them will just walk away without trying to understand all he wanted was the chance to be the one she always wished for without having to pay for the sins of the others that came before him… 190620111145

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Date: 6/22/2011 4:41:00 PM
seems we have all been wronged by past loves, one cannot stop trying to find there true love hopefully we learn from past heartbreaks to see through the b.s.
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:04:00 PM
oh how sweetly romantic Wilma.. he had his heart on his sleeve..tender ..toouching line.. brilliantly expressed with fervor my friend..luv it..
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:48:00 AM
oh, wilms.. emotional baggage from the past?? this sensitive, touching piece enthralls me... awesome! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:20:00 AM
When we fall in love with someone who has been hurt or mistreated before, it does take extra effort to convince them of our sincerity, Wilma. Quite a profound observation and so eloquently written, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:57:00 AM
190620111145???? may I inquire?..oh nevermind, I get it 6-19-2011 @11:45am...I AM SLOW....Don't worry about me, I'll be Ok!
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:54:00 AM
"wondering what route would take him the closest if the effort put in would be worth it in the end"-- Beautiful FLOW if I may say! I read this incorrectly at first. I thought it was titled Piccadilly, as in Piccadilly Palare by Morrissey of the Smiths; one of my all time favorite songs. Originally this is why the poem got my attention...but I am glad I read it b/c it was very original and descriptive!!!
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Date: 6/19/2011 4:47:00 AM
very tender write here Wilma....Love it....thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages.
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Date: 6/19/2011 4:45:00 AM
A thought-provoking write. We should not have to pay for the sins of others who have gone before us, but in life and love we often do just that. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/19/2011 4:35:00 AM
I like this a lot.. great descriptive words and meanings..A precious heart indeed.. I am well my luv... Yes I missed Chris's contest with "The Sun I See" but i will put it in his next one ...Hope your well to luv...always hugs Michael
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