The Passing Narcissist

I saw him, taller than corn, a high-collared shirt,
and wristy Rolex smile; beguile:  the club, deep-dark
low, and drawing in the rich and not so

and then moving from the brewing bar, the jar of late 
custom, floated to a sofa, sitting and announced,
”here’s the ladies, come to dance,”  
and lacquered whores, employed with fizzy drinks,
circled him like robbers, buy a horse;

And he was hand-made, every detail   Sachs, Dior,
light and shade; what silver spade had so fashioned,
 I do not know, such a loathsome song of self-love,
and  glow?

and later when he left, a monarch rising from his 
borrowed throne, I thought perhaps he wasn’t bad, 
or wasn’t good, nothing you could finger same, and say 
Oh yes, it’s plain!

and he smiled a smile of self- love, not hope, passing me 
as I drank;  and when he’d gone, I fancied I’d seen the Devil;
or the Devil’s name, holidaying fresh from hell; 
and quickly I looked the room;  for candle, book and bell; 
wondering  now  if I’d drawn in, his hellish earthly spell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fleming Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 2:39 AM
You, sir, are a very capable poet! You are endowed with excellent powers of observation. A good poem! Expressing an opinion not just of a despisable person but of the world at large: A world that is all sound-bite and image - and no substance!! :) john. P.s A "Seven"!!
D. Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:40 PM
very awesome and cool write. love the rythem you use very unique.
Holmes Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Thanks Nathan...peace and love...Peter
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February 18, 2015 at 10:41 PM
yes natural is was meant. your poetry flows very naturally. easy on the eyes/ears
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