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The Passing Breeze of Awakening

The passing breeze of awakening has fluttered by many a time. Yet still so many are asleep, oblivious to the sublime. They wander as if asleep in dreams and live a life with little meaning. Why can’t they wake and smell spring’s fragrance, hear spring’s croon and see her greening? It’s spring that brings us life anew and paints the blossoms on the trees. Open your eyes, oh, you who sleep. Awaken to the kiss of the passing breeze. Not only eyes, but ears and mouth. Open them up. Hear and taste of bliss. Don’t let that sweet breeze pass you by. Awaken and imbibe its heady kiss.

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Date: 7/29/2023 8:14:00 PM
beautiful, sometimes it sounds like a prayer for people, thanks yann
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Date: 7/29/2023 10:49:00 AM
Nice rhythmics poem with sweet reminders.
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Date: 7/29/2023 8:27:00 AM
A nice reflective rhyme. There's depth to this poem. And some nice rhyme.
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Date: 7/29/2023 7:33:00 AM
Nature can teach us so many things, Andrea, yours is far better than my entry...
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Date: 7/29/2023 4:21:00 AM
Andrea, what a beautiful interpretation you have crafted with these lovely lines! I especially like " and paints the blossoms on the trees" A sweet and gentle read this is!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 7/29/2023 3:30:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hi. Even with your busy schedule these days you have managed to create and execute beautiful poetry with clarity. Your title is wonderful and you did not stray. Yes may everything awaken if we just take the time to see and hear. Thank you as always for sharing your poetic talent. May today be a good day for you and your daughter. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 7/28/2023 6:41:00 PM
So lovely! I want to imbibe! Blessings, Friend!
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