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The Party Everyone is festive All the ladies in pretty dresses Champagne in flutes Flirts in Armani suits Waiters and penguins Serving wine and cheeses Musicians playing tango delights Diplomats avoiding land mines and devastated sites I toast them, one and all Vodka and Russians can not dance I can drink you all, under and over Tossing empty bottles over me shoulder Pretty ladies and purple purses Drunken observations as the poet muses Who would bed me now? So drunk and wise with broken fuses No one, can see the poetic disguise Of the lonely man seeking only lies The tenderness of the Spanish kiss Hold me, dear dream, caress me inside The floor is full of empty plates The party is over, so it seems is my fate I fall asleep under a street lit lamp The richest of bums in an old cul du sac If only before that fateful day I could suckle upon the breast once more We are all infants no matter the shore Love should never have parted out that door Sanity was broken and tossed away like lore I mumbled the petty desires of the broken man I tore out my heart, bloody and beating in my hands Laid it bare upon the sands Coupled with crabs The universe re-created Eaten raw, love was consumed New beasts shall roam Sunken eyes and empty chest I, am the one who is no more Tall tails and party hats The forgotten are never fancy cats Until one day you meet the maker Of your story, cooked by the baker Ovens shall burn and choirs sing The devil you see, had the last ring

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Date: 5/1/2016 10:16:00 PM
You have surpassed even your own great creativity with this jewel my friend. So many glowing and intensely deep and dark verses. Highest level poetry my immensely talented friend..A7, A FAV ..
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/6/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert!!!
Date: 4/9/2016 11:02:00 PM
Superb Arthur... I love you sense of the bizarre ~ kinda like my own. Wickedly enjoyable! Best wishes my friend. Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 11:07:00 PM
Keith, you are an inspiration to me! I hope you know that by now!
Date: 4/8/2016 3:50:00 PM
Dear Arthur Excellent write my fellow poet, hey I wanted to let you know I won't be on for awhile I've got to have surgery, on the 14, my heart is broken so they have to triple bypass it to fix it. But I have a great do and they say it will like having a whole new heart in the end, wish me luck my friend, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/8/2016 11:18:00 PM
oh my I hope you will be ok cherl, I will pray all goes well for you! 1000 Hugs!!
Date: 4/7/2016 12:14:00 AM
Great write Arthur, I enjoyed this.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Lewis!
Date: 4/5/2016 12:01:00 PM
Mr. Poe came to mind while reading this. Dark and deep yet colorful with imagery. Brilliant write Arthur! ; )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:14:00 PM
Anytime anyone says that makes me smile, as he was my first poetic inspiration!
Date: 4/5/2016 11:18:00 AM
lifestyle of the bored and pretentious?... awesome imagery, arthur!..huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thank you, was a lot going on there, I think! Even I haven't figured it all out! :)
Date: 4/3/2016 12:34:00 PM
I love this on so many levels Arthur Brilliant vivid description and rhyme - I laughed at the penguins couplet - such a fabulous image.. then the poem turned and became deep and dark - fabulous poem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan as you can see I am way behind here at soup!
Date: 4/3/2016 12:21:00 PM
oh my another dark one, reminiscent of Hotel California. I loved some of the unusual images in this, Arthur. Also it made me think of the bombing in Paris for some reason! SEVEN
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 10:11:00 PM
Not EIGHT? :) Hugs
Date: 4/3/2016 8:37:00 AM
I think you just have to find the right party. The devil is always asking us to dance when the fat lady sings but we can just turn the page. True poetry ripe with hidden messages.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/8/2016 11:17:00 PM
Where is this party with the fat lady?
Date: 4/3/2016 7:56:00 AM
Wow- "I fall asleep under a street lit lamp The richest of bums in an old cul du sac" " Sanity was broken and tossed away like lore I mumbled the petty desires of the broken man" I love your descriptions! x
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/8/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Cas, I am honored!!
Date: 4/3/2016 1:16:00 AM
Great descriptions, wording, imagery and rhyming. You were able to portray well that whole atmosphere of the party and what ensues after when it is over all the way down to post partum so to speak. Well done!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/8/2016 11:02:00 PM
Thank you so very much!!

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