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Park Bench At Christmas

Spending the holidays alone Going through the motions Sitting on our favorite bench On Christmas eve Reminiscing of fond yesteryears When we were together and All was well with the world Submitted on November 23, 2018 for contest THE PARK BENCH AT CHRISTMAS sponsored by SARA KENDRICK - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 12/20/2018 10:04:00 PM
Then the sparkle of a distant star catches your eye and you can feel his warmth once again. Great Poem Great win!
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Date: 12/21/2018 5:23:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 12/17/2018 4:00:00 PM
beautifully sad Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Jan.
Date: 12/16/2018 1:36:00 PM
I can feel the emotive quality of this one. I hope that you are not sad for the holidays but find warmth from family and friends. Thanks for the visit to my blog. I appreciate you participating in my contest. Sara
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/23/2018 9:26:00 PM
Heartfelt, empathetic, and true. Good luck in the contest, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 11/23/2018 5:58:00 PM
Beautifully sad
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Mike, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/23/2018 5:01:00 PM
oh, so sad! well written, line. good luck in the contest...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ilene.

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