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The Park Bench At Christmas

Serendipity personified, Christmas time. He sat on the park bench, so regal and fine. Feeling blessed, given a second chance at life. The same Godly-blessing not given to his wife. He felt cherished, loved, revered, understood and more. Had felt her beside him since he left Macy’s store. Elise had always loved his Santa Claus persona. Were the reindeer responding to his new-felt Nirvana? Wisemen. Bethlehem. Jesus, bringing inner peace. He felt her spirit beside him, his own sweet Elise. A glimmer of hope she might leave heaven tonight. He felt a whisper of an angel’s breath to his right. Sorry, my hero darling, he heard her speak in his mind. You have to stay longer, because it is not your time. The snow held a sparkle he had not noticed before. It was dazzling, crystal-magic, snow to adore. Christmas joys, Christmas wishes, shining star in the east. He felt humbled, and reverent, thinking of the Prince of Peace. Exuberant about the visit he had just had Such a magical night, he was no longer sad. Written 11-17-2018 Poetry Contest: The Park Bench at Christmas Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Picture #3

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Date: 12/19/2018 3:45:00 PM
You have creative a work which is expressive and emotive. I felt I was there in this magical place where loved lived again on that magic night. Top of the list is this winning work. Thanks for your participation in my contest. Sara
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/19/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thank you. I had a great time writing this; I knew a truly wonderful poetess would be the judge, so I took more time than usual and tried to throw in imagery in every possible way which is not my usual go-to as I normally stick to feelings. So thank you Sara. I am honored.
Date: 12/16/2018 12:29:00 PM
Wonderful write Caren..Congrats on your win..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/16/2018 8:13:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate it.
Date: 11/18/2018 12:10:00 AM
Touching story; beautifully penned.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/18/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you M.L. I am a story-telling maniac some days.
Date: 11/17/2018 6:13:00 PM
G'day Caren … nicely written story Caren. Christmas can bring great joy to many, but great sadness to some - enjoyed - Lindsay
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/17/2018 9:09:00 PM
It is funny how it seems to be either or, never in between.

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