The Parcel

“It’s a parcel for you, Sarge!”
the words hung visibly;
condensed in the bitter air.

Ice underfoot cracked
beneath the sodden boots 
approaching;
each step releasing 
fetid odours
of rotting corpses,
faeces,
death,
that it was hitherto
holding at bay.

A dozen pairs of eyes
stared, greedily
as the package exchanged hands.

Shaking, 
the sergeant held the box
in its crude wrapping
of brown paper
and string.

Eventually
he pulled off his stiff mittens
with teeth
which shifted painfully
in complaint
at the effort.

He glanced impassionately;
three fingers of one hand
four, on the other
useless black stumps,
rotted,
from frostbite,
neglect,
and gangrene.

His index still there
as was himself;
he could still pull a trigger.

‘Friends’ eagerly helped
the unwrapping;
a taste of candy
a drag on a ciggy
their anticipated reward.

He stared at the contents.
A pair of red gloves;
each finger lay there
as fresh, as red, as a poppy;
with a note from a child:

“Dear Tommy
I knitted these for you in class
to keep you warm
while you keep us safe,
I hope you like them,
Lillian.”






Of What Use Are Gloves To Fingers That Only Understand Mittens Poetry Contest: Placed 2nd
Sponsored by: John lawless
Date written 21st December 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Roper Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Wow. Love the story, Terry. Military man freezing cold with all his fingers almost gone from the froze bite. Well deserve win.
Miller Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Thank you so much Eve
Lawless Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Well done Terry, a poignant reflection on the subtle horror of war and its toll on all "involved" with the soldiers. Thanks for participating in the contest
Miller Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Hi John, thank you for the placement and for running the competition; I enjoyed the challenge of the theme.
Fowler Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Heart-tugging Terry. An excellent entry! :)
Miller Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Hi Linda, 'tis a bit of a tear-jerker. Thank you for your kind comments.
Cunningham Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 5:35 PM
I immediately thought of ww1 and soldiers receiving parcels from people at home. Great write Terry and good luck in the contest. Tom
Miller Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Tom
Wolf Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 5:27 PM
The poignant agony of war personified in this tender drama of a poem, Terry. Really, really good! Thanks, Gershon
Miller Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 12:54 AM
Thank you so much Gershon, I always appreciate your kind comments
Bell Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 5:31 AM
You are never alone in war, someone is always thinking of you.
Miller Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 12:55 AM
Thank you for your visit
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December 21, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Lovely sad write Terry….Debx
Miller Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 12:56 AM
My wife cried, and refuses to read it again, 'tis a bit sad, thank you for your kind comments.
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