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The Parcel

“It’s a parcel for you, Sarge!” the words hung visibly; condensed in the bitter air. Ice underfoot cracked beneath the sodden boots approaching; each step releasing fetid odours of rotting corpses, faeces, death, that it was hitherto holding at bay. A dozen pairs of eyes stared, greedily as the package exchanged hands. Shaking, the sergeant held the box in its crude wrapping of brown paper and string. Eventually he pulled off his stiff mittens with teeth which shifted painfully in complaint at the effort. He glanced impassionately; three fingers of one hand four, on the other useless black stumps, rotted, from frostbite, neglect, and gangrene. His index still there as was himself; he could still pull a trigger. ‘Friends’ eagerly helped the unwrapping; a taste of candy a drag on a ciggy their anticipated reward. He stared at the contents. A pair of red gloves; each finger lay there as fresh, as red, as a poppy; with a note from a child: “Dear Tommy I knitted these for you in class to keep you warm while you keep us safe, I hope you like them, Lillian.” Of What Use Are Gloves To Fingers That Only Understand Mittens Poetry Contest: Placed 2nd Sponsored by: John lawless Date written 21st December 2022

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Date: 1/24/2023 10:36:00 PM
Wow. Love the story, Terry. Military man freezing cold with all his fingers almost gone from the froze bite. Well deserve win.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/25/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve
Date: 1/24/2023 2:38:00 PM
Well done Terry, a poignant reflection on the subtle horror of war and its toll on all "involved" with the soldiers. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/25/2023 6:30:00 AM
Hi John, thank you for the placement and for running the competition; I enjoyed the challenge of the theme.
Date: 1/2/2023 8:22:00 AM
Heart-tugging Terry. An excellent entry! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/6/2023 7:17:00 AM
Hi Linda, 'tis a bit of a tear-jerker. Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 12/24/2022 5:35:00 PM
I immediately thought of ww1 and soldiers receiving parcels from people at home. Great write Terry and good luck in the contest. Tom
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/26/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Tom
Date: 12/21/2022 5:27:00 PM
The poignant agony of war personified in this tender drama of a poem, Terry. Really, really good! Thanks, Gershon
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 12:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Gershon, I always appreciate your kind comments
Date: 12/21/2022 5:31:00 AM
You are never alone in war, someone is always thinking of you.
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 12:55:00 AM
Thank you for your visit
Date: 12/21/2022 5:11:00 AM
Lovely sad write Terry….Debx
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Terry Miller
Date: 12/24/2022 12:56:00 AM
My wife cried, and refuses to read it again, 'tis a bit sad, thank you for your kind comments.

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