The Painful Daisy

Standing where I am when no one can see, I see a picture of  a purple daisy staring at me. A dew drop on top with like a tear from my eye, I see my painful past and start to cry. I needed to see something to make me feel happy, but that tear on a petal made me feel sappy. No reason for sadness except feeling remorse, see, since love died my life's been thrown off course. I see a field of emerald with a sky of azure, but can't really see the depth of it's beautiful allure. I feed off of my sorrow and crave my pain, in the sunshine I see nothing but a daisy in the rain. Upon her nectar she holds a Monarch butterfly, I see black and white and have no idea why. Maybe cuz' my love used to be full of red hues, and now all I can see is the blacks and blues. No daisy can amaze me like the way love did, drives me crazy and I get hazy...that's why I hid. But this painting I see is usually my artisan style, so why can't I find a way to share a lovely smile? ~pictures aren't perfect with the pleasure of pain~ February 1, 2017
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Roper Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful, Laura ~*
Salehi Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Nicely done.... Beautiful
Adams Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Yes pain and grief colors our world in darkness. So well expressed, Laura Loo. Many blessings to you.
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 3:00 AM
Wow! LuLoo, this is just what I wanted to see today, a gem among too many 'happy' poems:):) a 7 and a fave:)
Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 6:29 PM
A beautiful poem you have composed here, Laura! Lovely!
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