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The Owl

I have become like him; nocturnal. Prematurely anaesthetised by exhaustion then jerked awake into the darkness. How long since I have slept 'til dawn? A stifled yawn veiling scurrying thoughts. Tennis match of emotions; back and forth; volleying, lobbing this way and that. The game, set and match of insomnia. Then rallying forth as dawn brings clarity. Despairing disparity sleeping finally. The silence of the night amplifies my heartbeat. Each breath echoes in the unsettled gloom. As the dawn casts its ghostly light around the room sleepless wakefulness wanes with the retiring moon, and the owl rests, fatigued by his 'whooing'. Unlike me he can sleep by day, the night is his time, not mine; I am the intruder in the darkness; a restless insomniac with an overactive brain. Sleep well majestic wise one. No doubt, when night falls, I will share your company again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/12/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Helen. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:51:00 PM
A well thought out and understood write dear poet ! Congratulations on its feature ! much love, james
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Date: 11/8/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Helen. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:31:00 AM
oh Helen! Another great write! I like the assembly of words and your rhythm! Well done.
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Date: 12/10/2008 12:35:00 AM
Helen: Thanks so much for your reviews! I am most grateful... K.
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Date: 12/7/2008 6:20:00 AM
I go through bouts of insomnia myself and can relate so well. Of course I could never express it as perfectly as you did here. Each verse is a truth I live, on those horrid nights. Hoping you finally get a good nights sleep. Amazing poetry as always. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/7/2008 4:28:00 AM
Helen I appreciate the open honesty regarding oneself in this poem - Very well written - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:53:00 AM
Wow, that is no fun. I always got insomnia while pregnant, and it was horrible! Helen, this was so beautilly written, may sleep be yours tonight. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/6/2008 11:24:00 PM
Great language... I love 'dawn/yawn' and 'clarity/disparity.' Insomnia is no joke... so well expressed! Best wishes, Keith
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