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The Other Side of Time

Days whipping by calendar real Father Time waits for no one and brings all of us to the same destination As a stream creates smooth pebbles So does time wear down our rough edges When the last songbird has sung its tune Then light from the sky will illuminate our path Walking on "gilded splinters" We reach out for eternity We will be cut down eventually but it won;t be for lack of trying!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/4/2016 3:18:00 PM
Great job. Did you do it for the contest? I never see you enter contests, but this fits the contest about time very well!!
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Date: 9/27/2016 10:57:00 PM
Great write, I really loved the lines "As a stream creates smooth pebbles" Time gets us all in the end, beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/27/2016 10:30:00 PM
I like this, Matthew! Great imagery! Love, Kim
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