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Poetry/Metrical Tale/The Other Side Of The Veil
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1515-955-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 11, 2023
For the International Contest, Metrical Tale
Sponsor, Hilo Poet, Judged 01/04/2024

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The Other Side of the Veil

 
"There is order in God's heaven and there is no time." Quote by _Constance In my mind, I lift the veil to heaven and follow a whirling bright gold light at the end of a tunnel I stand then, beautiful angel's guide me before me are Romanesque ornate temples and flower gardens with birds with ponds, streams, and waterfalls in the distance are oceans- mountains I see cats, dogs- and tangled green forests I feel weightless and all pain has dropped away and there is a peace and harmony and a huge temple with double doors with words 'Orientation' engraved in stone an angel counselor waits there is sweet music floating she explains the many temples and in a silent room I rest my soul then, like a movie my life plays back for me I journey through the many beautiful buildings the temple of wisdom and justice records, and more- and elders help me my last is the temple of God and heaven- I float through the golden gates for my earthly shell is gone there is no time only eternity and my loved ones take my hand- showing me all the beauty that is heaven
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2024 11:30:00 AM
Silent, thank you so much for the congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/14/2023 2:05:00 AM
How evocative and wonderful are your Thoughts on our final home Constance' I certainly wouldent want to miss out on The above reality, and I would think it is Even more beautiful that you or I can imagine Thank you for giving me a lift in my spirit today'
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Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2023 6:41:00 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, yes, I think you are right, words can not even explain the beauty of Heaven, blessings Constance
Date: 1/12/2023 2:00:00 AM
Beautiful scenes! Best of luck for the contest:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2023 2:47:00 PM
RA, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and encouragement, Constance
Date: 1/11/2023 8:13:00 PM
You speak words of amazement Sis!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2023 10:24:00 PM
Bobby, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 1/11/2023 3:01:00 PM
This is just lovely, Constance! That's pretty much how I perceive it, too, but you say it much better :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2023 10:25:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 1/11/2023 1:21:00 PM
On the other side of the veil is a place of beauty called heaven. Good luck in the contest Constance. love phyl
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Date: 1/11/2023 12:26:00 PM
A lovely write/quote/picture. I will soup mail you. Have a great day.............
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Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2023 10:26:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and compliment, will check your soupmail, Constance
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