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Poetry/Metrical Tale/The Other Side Of The Veil
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1515-955-11
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 11, 2023
For the International Contest, Metrical Tale
Sponsor, Hilo Poet, Judged 01/04/2024

Eighth Place

Mansions: Heavenly Ghetto | Be You for a Purpose

"There is order in God's heaven and there is no time." Quote by _Constance In my mind, I lift the veil to heaven and follow a whirling bright gold light at the end of a tunnel I stand then, beautiful angel's guide me before me are Romanesque ornate temples and flower gardens with birds with ponds, streams, and waterfalls in the distance are oceans- mountains I see cats, dogs- and tangled green forests I feel weightless and all pain has dropped away and there is a peace and harmony and a huge temple with double doors with words 'Orientation' engraved in stone an angel counselor waits there is sweet music floating she explains the many temples and in a silent room I rest my soul then, like a movie my life plays back for me I journey through the many beautiful buildings the temple of wisdom and justice records, and more- and elders help me my last is the temple of God and heaven- I float through the golden gates for my earthly shell is gone there is no time only eternity and my loved ones take my hand- showing me all the beauty that is heaven

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Silent One

Date: 1/5/2024 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2024 11:30:00 AM

Silent, thank you so much for the congratulations, Constance

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/14/2023 2:05:00 AM

How evocative and wonderful are your Thoughts on our final home Constance' I certainly wouldent want to miss out on The above reality, and I would think it is Even more beautiful that you or I can imagine Thank you for giving me a lift in my spirit today'

Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2023 6:41:00 AM

Joe, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, yes, I think you are right, words can not even explain the beauty of Heaven, blessings Constance

Ranaditya Adhikary

Date: 1/12/2023 2:00:00 AM

Beautiful scenes! Best of luck for the contest:-)

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2023 2:47:00 PM

RA, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment and encouragement, Constance

Bobby May

Date: 1/11/2023 8:13:00 PM

You speak words of amazement Sis!

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2023 10:24:00 PM

Bobby, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance

Ann Peck

Date: 1/11/2023 3:01:00 PM

This is just lovely, Constance! That's pretty much how I perceive it, too, but you say it much better :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2023 10:25:00 PM

Ann, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/11/2023 1:21:00 PM

On the other side of the veil is a place of beauty called heaven. Good luck in the contest Constance. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2023 12:26:00 PM

A lovely write/quote/picture. I will soup mail you. Have a great day.............

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2023 10:26:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the visit, comment, and compliment, will check your soupmail, Constance