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The Open Door

I took a stroll to clear my thoughts, deep in the woods, the path had brought. The dark then found me all alone, I lost the sight of light that shown. I traveled blind among the pine, until an open glade I find. The only sound that I could hear, the echo of my heart from fear. Then I saw a light so dim nearby, it drew my stare and held my eye. Then something very strange appeared, and soon I felt my fear had cleared. I stood before a crease in time, a portal to things left behind. Once I walked through open door, all things I knew, I knew no more. I lost my way, but self I found, and to this earth I am not bound. Will walk in starlight all my days, while in the sunrise will I gaze. So cry nor seek for me no more, unless you pass the open door. And if you choose to follow me, stay far behind and let me be. If you go your way, I'll go mine, then both our inner peace we'll find. 11/1/18

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:14:00 AM
Wren, a great descriptive and well written poem . Congratulations on your win!:). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/19/2019 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Eve have a wonderful weekend my friend!
Date: 1/16/2019 3:37:00 AM
Wren, I love this transcendental poem. So well written and certainly deserving of your first placement! Congratulations! : )
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/16/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 1/13/2019 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations dear Wren, on your first tier win! Well done, again :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/14/2019 4:24:00 AM
Thank you PS!
Date: 1/13/2019 7:32:00 AM
Hi Wren, You've penned a good poem about finding inner peace. At least that's what I got of it. Nevertheless, It was a well written piece. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/13/2019 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Alexis!
Date: 1/13/2019 7:15:00 AM
i loved how the words in this poem rolled off the tip of my tongue... Deep personal poem, sometimes we have to say goodbye.. Great take on the contest Wren.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/13/2019 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Silent One for your comments and for sponsoring the contest!
Date: 11/1/2018 6:18:00 PM
Hello Wren, I find myself walking or sitting by the water watching the waves come to shore. Water is peaceful for me. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/1/2018 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem, it's always good to hear from you my friend.
Date: 11/1/2018 7:08:00 AM
I always find my real self in the woods, when I am alone. Nicely penned my friend!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/1/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. Have a nice day.
Date: 11/1/2018 12:25:00 AM
excellente'....clapaclapclap : )
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/1/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thank you.

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