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The Opal Ring

he made for me sits there endlessly alone in the small wooden box it came in, It is now hidden, shining with a wisdom forever stone deep but no more and forgetting why. Yet this finger remembers a quick, colorful warmth slipped naked within its chilled simple elegance. The Opal Ring he made for me sits there endlessly, the beauty a nerve unwilling to be touched still; one day it will only Dust with old sadness unwilling to be touched then, too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 4:14:00 AM
Rachel - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:16:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:28:00 PM
Rachel - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:34:00 PM
Hi Rachel Congrats on your wonderful pem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/22/2008 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2008 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 10/20/2008 6:19:00 AM
Lovely poem about something very special and personal~ Congratulations on this featured work! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/20/2008 5:34:00 AM
This is a personal write I believe and very spectacular. Just loved the way the feelings were put together. So heartfelt. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/20/2008 4:31:00 AM
Congrats on this pick. there's something quite charming about this intimate speculation. I like its simplicity. Love, daver
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Date: 10/19/2008 9:46:00 PM
Rachel congrats on having your beautifully sad poem featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations Rachel on your beautiful, yet sad poem being featured this week. Love, Shar
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