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If a poet falls in love with you you will live forever. Atticus Finch - To kill a mockingbird. In the midst of conundrums, of 'what ifs.' I dislike the ocean, its bitter saltiness, brings no joy. Perched safely, upon the highest cliff, watching waves surge upon the shore. They are a constant reminder of how you waved goodbye. Each ripple carried you away - forever. Lost in reflection, sentimental memories remain eternal. Recalling how the sun caressed your face, mirroring your spirited smile - like a lantern in my darkness. Still unforgettable - the joy in those soulful eyes - each time you glanced at me. Nonchalantly, I would follow you. As we walked without a care - you never seeming to tire. In our youthful playground, rusty see-saws and swings still remember our laughter and tears - that first sophomoric kiss and I can still taste you. When night would arrive, there was no fear, hand in hand. You were like a mystical pixie, glowing in the enchantment of moonlight - it would illuminate through your eyes. We could have danced all night, our souls ascending to the heavens. But, I was afraid of new horizons, because, I knew you would depart - just like a shooting star. Without thinking, I broke your heart - before you could heal mine. I remain in the silence of 'what ifs.' But, I smile, content - knowing that once there was a time, your heart and mine, merged like day and night. Simple Musing 4 July 2020 This is a fictional poem. An example for the 'One who got away' contest.

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Date: 11/6/2020 9:03:00 PM
Your way with words hold a kind of sweet tortured enchantment. I’m moderately delighted of the vivid imagery created negating excessive details. Very beautiful!
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Silent One
Date: 11/7/2020 9:26:00 AM
Thank you.. Sometimes, I forget poems, that I have written, this was a nice reminder..
Date: 7/17/2020 7:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, SO! Deeply emotional. This undertow of timeless introspection pulled me under, yet willingly I gave my surrendering eyes to this poetic majesty. Stellar ink, my dear friend. Love and more love always.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 7/17/2020 7:22:00 AM
Btw ... thanks for the great quote! May love and peace rest upon you always.
Date: 7/9/2020 5:50:00 PM
Wonderfully written, and those that have experienced some of your intimate details can appreciate the level of love mixed in with emotions that transcend ones soul. An exceptional entry for the Contest Silent One...
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Date: 7/8/2020 8:58:00 AM
Such beautiful words intricately woven into this intriguing poem, SO, beyond beautiful:)
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:42:00 PM
Wow, beautiful and heartfelt even if fiction, Silent! I should have read this before I entered the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/7/2020 10:02:00 AM
wow. I LOVE this, Silent One. Your writing has developed and I absolutely adore where it has taken you. There is a stanza in here that I believe stand completely alone. I will write it in a single post next. This is a favorite for me.
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Becca Teagan
Date: 7/7/2020 10:02:00 AM
"Without thinking, I broke your heart - before you could heal mine"
Date: 7/6/2020 11:43:00 AM
You got this Silent One, and I doubt it if it doesn't reach the stars of poetry soup, even if it doesn't , its definitely reached my podium, Love and light xo
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:11:00 AM
Been there and done that, yet t'was nothing like your wonderful Poetry...
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:47:00 AM
What if that was the one, what if we had carried on, what if it was all wrong, what if it was meant to be strong, what if, what if , what if,life cannot be perfect, some things or persons disappear from our grasp, they were just not meant to be! A lovely poem with much emotion. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 7/5/2020 7:17:00 PM
I love it :)
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Date: 7/5/2020 5:00:00 PM
Love is a living thing and like all living things without the proper nourishment it will wither and die. A very touching piece my friend. Filled with beautiful imagery and much emotion. God Bless. JB
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Date: 7/5/2020 4:37:00 PM
Riveting imagery driving this poem. Relatable emotions coming ashore and into focus like tsunami. I guess in this finite world, it is better to have at least touched boughs for a memorable moment, than to pass as those lonely ships in the night running out of time. I have lots of regrets. Many apologies I wish I could give. Great read, Si!
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Date: 7/5/2020 2:24:00 PM
I love this beautifully wrought and very inspirational piece my friend. As I have had a lot- far too man,y of those what ifs, in my youth. A true gem and a fav too.... God bless...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/5/2020 6:33:00 PM
Yes ,too many. And pains that still to this day hurt. Yet life travels ever onward into the shades Time's ever speeding echoes of eternity.
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 3:20:00 PM
Oh that sounds like s lot of losses... Thank you Robert .
Date: 7/5/2020 11:18:00 AM
The things we do because of fear...Almost as if too much good is bad...then we immortalize it...Well done
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 3:19:00 PM
Indeed or immaturity... Thank you
Date: 7/5/2020 8:05:00 AM
Well written, Si, there is great poetic artistry in this piece.
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 7/5/2020 7:17:00 AM
The "what ifs" might bring a fleeting sensation of satisfaction as they might leave a bitter taste of regret. They might shape a whole world we dream to embrace and attempt to defy both time and fate. The "what ifs", a boon for a great loss! a relief from an unbearable ache! the power to capture the beauty of the past and transcend it to the wonder of the dream! Your words, Silent One emanate from a deep perception of such a real state so many relate to.. you wrap them in a so beautiful poetry!
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Besma...
Date: 7/4/2020 10:44:00 PM
A heart will always question- moments of yesterday. Of a love that it once knew. This is beautiful, tender and emotional- all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 3:15:00 PM
Indeed... Thank you
Date: 7/4/2020 8:30:00 PM
Yours musings are rarely simple, Silent One .This is gorgeous!! (love that quote at the top. it's so true!)
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 3:15:00 PM
Thank you...Every poet has one..
Date: 7/4/2020 5:08:00 PM
The one that got away, how we all look back and think of old flames and what it would been like if we had carried on, unfortunately it's the great unknown. Great example for your contest S. O. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 7/5/2020 2:29:00 PM
Yes I think many have one that got away...
Date: 7/4/2020 1:46:00 PM
Love this! read your explanation, realized I had similar theme so made some minor edits, bobs yer uncle...
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Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 4:23:00 PM
Thanks..
Date: 7/4/2020 11:39:00 AM
Each ones childhood memories... I can see my self in your poem...beautifully expressed.
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Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 4:22:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 7/4/2020 11:31:00 AM
A sentiment journey of a love that got away, Well penned Silent
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Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 4:22:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 7/4/2020 10:41:00 AM
<3
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Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 4:22:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 7/4/2020 9:47:00 AM
She lives forever in the poet's mind--fictional though it may be, your poem speaks of enchanting love from the treasures of youth that we have all experienced in some form. And many such don't survive the test of time. Details of your verses take the reader back in time to a special place, SO.
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Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 4:21:00 PM
It is fiction.. but there have been love interests who I often think about... Thanks Vijay..
Date: 7/4/2020 9:09:00 AM
- I love your example ... I hope you will "love" my contribution :))) - Have a wonderful weekend, my friend S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 4:20:00 PM
Thank you..I am sure yours is great..

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