Get Your Premium Membership

The One-Legged Sandpiper

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Greg Gaul.


Colored Pencil Illustration by G.Gaul 4/23

I saw a one-legged Sandpiper today on the beach. I saw him land on his single pedestal, it was an artful thing. Entranced by his disability, I stood transfixed with curiosity. I so wanted to help him but we're worlds apart. How can he feed? How can he fend? Suddenly, he flew away up the beach, I followed him. There he stood lightly wafting in the wind, still balanced on that single leg. His fellow Sandpipers scurry about unnoticing his remarkable challenge. Later, a kindly friend told me shorebirds often hide one leg to conserve energy. Silly, I felt a loss for my misplaced empathy towards my one-legged friend. What a self-centered bubble I live in. We're always so troubled by what we think we know. Truth is, we know so little. Next time on the beach, I'll look for the one-legged Sandpiper. It'll remind me that there's so much I still don't know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/17/2023 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/picture. Both a great job. Have a wonderful day..........
Login to Reply
Date: 3/11/2021 4:01:00 PM
Well penned! Yes, there’s a lot we don’t know and cant just assume.
Login to Reply
Gaul Avatar
Greg Gaul
Date: 3/12/2021 11:32:00 AM
Jennifer, yes, it's a subtle story of self realization. Shorebirds can even teach us, if we notice. Thank you.
Date: 4/3/2020 11:19:00 PM
Have had this experience Greg - sending out sympathy to a shorebird I thought was injured only to see them put two feet on the sand feeling relief, and a little silly! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Gaul Avatar
Greg Gaul
Date: 4/4/2020 8:11:00 AM
Yikes Sam! You're one of the few. Fact is, this scenario repeats throughout my life with different variables. Thanks, as always, for your insight and congratulations for your recent high placements. So nice for you to notice my scribbles.
Date: 10/4/2018 8:48:00 PM
I absolutely adore the sensitive introspection of your beautiful poem, Greg. I was captivated by its thoughtful and meaningful spirit that was so wonderfully expressed. Congratulations on your fine win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Gaul Avatar
Greg Gaul
Date: 10/5/2018 3:57:00 PM
Susan, thanks very much for your thoughtful commentary on my poem. The introspection was and is the crux of the conceit of my poem. Most poems I've read are more absolutist and simplistic in their morality. Your insight is refreshing.
Date: 10/1/2018 1:58:00 PM
Oh I really like this Greg. Congrats on your win! This one's going in to my faves :)) xomo
Login to Reply
Mcgreavy Avatar
Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/1/2018 3:34:00 PM
Woah! I felt like a celebrity for a second there. Ya made me look ;) I got a couple with over a grand. But birds of a feather, maybe, birds tend to flock in my work, along with brooding human nature. Namaste my friend.
Gaul Avatar
Greg Gaul
Date: 10/1/2018 2:57:00 PM
Maureen, I'm humbled by your comment. I've looked at the hundreds of poems you've written and seen many with over a thousand views. This piece is so simple and yet you like it. Maybe we are birds of feather of sorts. Namaste.
Date: 10/1/2018 11:44:00 AM
Nicely done Greg, congrats on a fine placement!
Login to Reply
Gaul Avatar
Greg Gaul
Date: 10/1/2018 3:02:00 PM
John, thanks for recognizing my little piece. Hubris is such fun to write about, especially when it's my own. I appreciate your insight and efforts in running these contests. They truly are a help to novices like me.

Book: Shattered Sighs