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The Old Ways

You ridicule the baobab tree Where the village After the abeng was blown Meet to chart each new destiny Speak of the old ways As primitive and ancient But crime was not rampant Like ants scurrying in their nest Biting at everything And young girls did not walk With babies Before they had finished school And young boys Did not pile with nothing to do On dusty corners While fallowing fields turn to ruin And families did not fall apart Like dry corn Shelled from withered cob. And we knew how to disagree In our conversations Without the circus economy Of unjust courts and corrupt police And we were not civilized then Because we were happy men. Where the baobab tree use to be A gym is there now For children who do no work again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/28/2009 2:38:00 AM
A good poet like you L'nass must use his talent to ask these questions in this way..Keep on my friend.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/27/2009 8:46:00 PM
there is alot of truth in these lines, how sad it is that the world is as corrupt as it is and people have no moral value anymore. Thanks for stopping and commenting on my work!
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Date: 4/27/2009 1:54:00 PM
ow my i was gonna miss reading this-i wish i lived in those days,they were brighter days the days of baobab trees;-)-----charma
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:22:00 AM
A very thought provoking poem L'nass. Well done! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:15:00 PM
We knew how to disagree in our conversations....that line makes me think of how sad youth can be today:Refusing to read books to strengthen their view from which to argue....but ever swelling pride, as to never possess the humility to lose as they ball up fists and wield pistols. Well thought and written brother! Steve
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:53:00 PM
A cob stripped of its corn is a good way to describe the lack of interest and creativity in today's youth, Shango. Miss the days of the "baobab trees." Great poem!
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Date: 4/26/2009 7:01:00 AM
Man...Shango.. this is some write.. you have my mind thinking beyond the words..traveling off the screen to another place....I love this piece alot...the last line speaks a thousand messages.
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