The Old Ways

You ridicule the baobab tree
Where the village 
After the abeng was blown
Meet to chart each new destiny

Speak of the old ways
As primitive and ancient
But crime was not rampant
Like ants scurrying in their nest
Biting at everything
And young girls did not walk
With babies
Before they had finished school
And young boys
Did not pile with nothing to do
On dusty corners
While fallowing fields turn to ruin
And families did not fall apart
Like dry corn
Shelled from withered cob.
And we knew how to disagree
In our conversations
Without the circus economy
Of unjust courts and corrupt police
And we were not civilized then
Because we were happy men.

Where the baobab tree use to be
A gym is there now
For children who do no work again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Strand Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 2:38 AM
A good poet like you L'nass must use his talent to ask these questions in this way..Keep on my friend.Rgds Brian
Bird Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 8:46 PM
there is alot of truth in these lines, how sad it is that the world is as corrupt as it is and people have no moral value anymore. Thanks for stopping and commenting on my work!
Chircop Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 1:54 PM
ow my i was gonna miss reading this-i wish i lived in those days,they were brighter days the days of baobab trees;-)-----charma
Rider Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:22 AM
A very thought provoking poem L'nass. Well done! ~Trudy~
Voorhees Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:15 PM
We knew how to disagree in our conversations....that line makes me think of how sad youth can be today:Refusing to read books to strengthen their view from which to argue....but ever swelling pride, as to never possess the humility to lose as they ball up fists and wield pistols. Well thought and written brother! Steve
Devonshire Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 2:53 PM
A cob stripped of its corn is a good way to describe the lack of interest and creativity in today's youth, Shango. Miss the days of the "baobab trees." Great poem!
Higgins Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 7:01 AM
Man...Shango.. this is some write.. you have my mind thinking beyond the words..traveling off the screen to another place....I love this piece alot...the last line speaks a thousand messages.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace