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The Old Victorian House

I dreamt about an old Victorian house that was abandoned
It was dilapidated and left vacant for years and was starting to decay
It was hidden down a long dirt driveway aligned with overgrown lilac trees
The grounds were overgrown grass that resembled a field of wildflowers 
I decided to look inside, the front door was unlocked, and I let myself in
I entered a beautiful parlor with floor to ceiling bookcases and wingback chairs 
Sticking out was a rare Charles Dicken's book, I took it and sat in a chair to read 
I fell asleep until I awakened in my bed as I noticed the rare book in my hand

Where did the book come from, was I really in that old Victorian house?
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Maverick Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 4:00 AM
Its one story for the books Tania, not to scary From the dream house of some rarity.'
Kitchin Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Joe, thank you.
Stebbings Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Like it, Tania. Very thought provoking. Love the picture too. // Barry
Kitchin Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Barry, thank you.
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 5:56 AM
o, I really love the real twist at the end Tania. Skillfully crafted! Congratulations! :)
Kitchin Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Linda, thank you.
Ibeh Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 5:04 AM
Beautiful poem and a delightful read. I was a big Charles Dickens fan as a teenager. I still am.Congratulations on your win!
Kitchin Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 2:14 PM
Ed, thank you.
Rolland Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:24 AM
very exciting and surprising poem, i loved both creativity and ending, congrats on your win
Kitchin Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 2:15 PM
Yann, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:18 PM
- Exciting ... I love stories like this, Tania :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win................
Kitchin Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Paula, thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Ooh! Mysterious! Love this charming write! I wonder if your protagonist will come across the house on a walk…in her dreams! Congrats!
Kitchin Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Kim, thank you.
George Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:14 PM
This sounds so mysterious! Is it a dream, a reverie or hallucination? Who can say? House and book matching with the Victorian Era. So well written, dear Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 3:35 AM
Valsa, thank you.
Crandall Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 3:34 PM
That's a really cool poem. I like the idea that the book was in your hand when you wake up and you don't know where it came from!
Kitchin Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 3:35 AM
David, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:54 AM
A great dream. Best for a win.
Kitchin Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Victor, thank you.
Gasun Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 8:19 AM
Wow! It's like a dream came true. Awesome piece my dear poet friend Tania. I enjoyed immensely reading it toniight. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bles you always and your poetry. Hugs
Kitchin Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Len, thank you.
Lane Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 5:51 AM
You did justice in your description of that Victorian. It must have been grand in its day. Appropriate that you chose a Dicken's novel. ;-)
Kitchin Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 8:04 AM
Lin, thank you.
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