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The Old School House

The tiny old school, which was my first guide, has become a museum of a distant age. The playground--swings, bars, and slide, still stand in mute dismemberment stage. A fence around, a ticket to buy, purchasing memories packed away. Days so distant, unseen if you try; Sharpened pencil scent, recalled today. Inside, Grade One, up the stairs, Grade Two. How can it now all appear so small? So proud to pass to second-grade view learning how to write, we felt so tall! The tables are there: six of us at each, and now I don't remember one name. They gave our class the best to teach: so tiny, like one of us, we felt the same. Some memories better left behind, with sadness they bring of years long past; and daydreams we always hoped to find around the corner where dreams can last. September 13, 2022 for Back to School contest by Francine Roberts Honorable Mention

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Date: 9/21/2022 6:35:00 AM
This is just beautiful Ann. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/28/2022 3:59:00 PM
Thanks to Mr. Owl (I think), too!
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/23/2022 5:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/21/2022 3:44:00 PM
yep :))
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/21/2022 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, Linda! My poem isn't what she asked for so I'm pleasantly surprised.
Date: 9/21/2022 2:30:00 AM
Very much enjoyed this, Ann. I wouldn't want to displace any of the other winners but I also wouldn’t have been surprised at a higher placement. Congrats on your ‘win’. Terry
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/21/2022 3:32:00 PM
How nice of you, Terry. Thank you. I loved your poem!
Date: 9/20/2022 7:38:00 PM
I LOVED this, and am glad you made the short list, which I am happy to be on too. Congrats to you, Ann
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/21/2022 3:10:00 PM
It is fantastic. Check out #1. So funny
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/21/2022 2:47:00 PM
I entered at the last moment. It was nice of Francine to give me an HM. I haven't read yours yet as my oldest son was here for three days and now I'm behind. I know your poem is beautiful, as all of yours are. :)
Date: 9/20/2022 7:36:00 PM
Great writing with vivid narration. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/18/2022 11:23:00 PM
Oh this is so good, Ann, not only nostalgic but sentimental, that of which i love.
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/19/2022 11:07:00 AM
I love sentimental, too, Harry. Many young poets don't seem at all interested to write or read. Your poetry of late has been phenomenal!
Date: 9/18/2022 10:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem bringing a train of nostalgic remembrances ! Journeying back to the school days is always a pleasure. Thank you Ann fo taking me to a time, I always like to re visit !
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/24/2022 3:40:00 PM
That's so sweet, Valsa. The school was so tiny but we thought it was so big. :)
Date: 9/18/2022 8:53:00 AM
I love this. It oozes nostalgia. I think it is going to place HIGH
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/21/2022 3:29:00 PM
Oops, I'm wrong. I did enter Francine's contest at the last minute. I wrote the poem not knowing there was a school contest, so it really isn't what she asked for, so I'm pleasantly surprised!
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/19/2022 10:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. I didn't enter a contest, just wrote it as a kind of remembrance of that really old school, now torn down.
Date: 9/17/2022 6:20:00 AM
what a beautiful nostalgic write - feelings we can all relate to, my friend
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/17/2022 12:48:00 PM
Jack, Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 9/13/2022 11:08:00 AM
I recall the names of elementary school teachers, but that is it! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/13/2022 11:28:00 AM
I remember Miss Malotta, our tiny teacher, and my fav high school teachers :) Aloha!

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