The Old School House

The tiny old school, which was my first guide,
has become a museum of a distant age.
The playground--swings, bars, and slide,
still stand in mute dismemberment stage.

A fence around, a ticket to buy,
purchasing memories packed away.
Days so distant, unseen if you try;
Sharpened pencil scent, recalled today.

Inside, Grade One, up the stairs, Grade Two.
How can it now all appear so small?
So proud to pass to second-grade view
learning how to write, we felt so tall!

The tables are there: six of us at each,
and now I don't remember one name.
They gave our class the best to teach:
so tiny, like one of us, we felt the same.

Some memories better left behind,
with sadness they bring of years long past;
and daydreams we always hoped to find
around the corner where dreams can last.

September 13, 2022
for Back to School contest
by Francine Roberts
Honorable Mention
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:35 AM
This is just beautiful Ann. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Peck Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 3:59 PM
Thanks to Mr. Owl (I think), too!
Peck Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 5:46 PM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:44 PM
yep :))
Peck Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, Linda! My poem isn't what she asked for so I'm pleasantly surprised.
Flood Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 2:30 AM
Very much enjoyed this, Ann. I wouldn't want to displace any of the other winners but I also wouldn’t have been surprised at a higher placement. Congrats on your ‘win’. Terry
Peck Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:32 PM
How nice of you, Terry. Thank you. I loved your poem!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 7:38 PM
I LOVED this, and am glad you made the short list, which I am happy to be on too. Congrats to you, Ann
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:10 PM
It is fantastic. Check out #1. So funny
Peck Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 2:47 PM
I entered at the last moment. It was nice of Francine to give me an HM. I haven't read yours yet as my oldest son was here for three days and now I'm behind. I know your poem is beautiful, as all of yours are. :)
Alex Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 7:36 PM
Great writing with vivid narration. Congratulations!
Horsman Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:23 PM
Oh this is so good, Ann, not only nostalgic but sentimental, that of which i love.
Peck Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 11:07 AM
I love sentimental, too, Harry. Many young poets don't seem at all interested to write or read. Your poetry of late has been phenomenal!
George Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 10:59 PM
Beautiful poem bringing a train of nostalgic remembrances ! Journeying back to the school days is always a pleasure. Thank you Ann fo taking me to a time, I always like to re visit !
Peck Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 3:40 PM
That's so sweet, Valsa. The school was so tiny but we thought it was so big. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 8:53 AM
I love this. It oozes nostalgia. I think it is going to place HIGH
Peck Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:29 PM
Oops, I'm wrong. I did enter Francine's contest at the last minute. I wrote the poem not knowing there was a school contest, so it really isn't what she asked for, so I'm pleasantly surprised!
Peck Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 10:49 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. I didn't enter a contest, just wrote it as a kind of remembrance of that really old school, now torn down.
Horne Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 6:20 AM
what a beautiful nostalgic write - feelings we can all relate to, my friend
Peck Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 12:48 PM
Jack, Thank you so much for your kind words.
Leffanta Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 11:08 AM
I recall the names of elementary school teachers, but that is it! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Peck Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 11:28 AM
I remember Miss Malotta, our tiny teacher, and my fav high school teachers :) Aloha!
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