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The Old Rusty Gate

Alone it stands amid the tangled weeds- a rusty gate, ajar- that leads nowhere. Wrought iron, tall, it surely served all needs protecting entry into what was there. What secrets does it hold, this rusty gate? How many passed unto the other side? Where are the remnants of its purposed fate that trees and weeds replaced to fill and hide? Just passing through, I have no access to the history of this abandoned land; perhaps a small estate, a church? No clue presents itself- as here alone I stand. I walk away- this vision in my head; how ravages of time- no truths unthread. June 26, 2022 Contest: One In Five Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Theme: The Old Rusty Gate

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Date: 7/11/2022 4:16:00 PM
Very nicely penned Sandra, Congrats on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2022 1:50:00 PM
Another nice contest, Joseph, and thanks so much for my nice placement! Sandra
Date: 7/11/2022 12:28:00 PM
Love this, Sandra. Kinda ‘even a gate to nowhere must have once gone somewhere’. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Date: 6/27/2022 10:09:00 AM
Wow i can picture now an old rusty abandoned gate with this fab poem in your superb rhyming. Kudos for this fine poem! ^^^^^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~ Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2022 1:52:00 PM
Thank you very much! I will visit your poem soon. Sandra

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