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The Old Red Maple

Too long since smooth sapling skin
bent supple with the slightest breeze;
now stretched, fissured and furrowed -
bored, burned and bent - 
sliced, scarred and carved, yet
I have lived wonderfully and fully.

Old limbs that once swung
a laughing child and sheltered
more than one forbidden kiss;
the only witness to many lonely tears
and, at least as many hopeful prayers.

Why pensive then, when so many
would desire my fate?

Perhaps those melancholy desires
for what was, when I stood not
quite as tall, when many 
proud elders surrounded me,
wise and strong but now gone.

I will soon join them but
today a Robin tickles my brow -
a home for one more brood
and October will find one last shout
of crimson beauty ... I am still     
      proud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Dear Craig, I’m so pleased to return and reread this beautiful poem. I enjoyed the old red maple’s reverie and captivating introspection. Congratulations for your success in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Godwin Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 3:04 AM
I'm in love with this. I have no memory of ever reading a poem from the pov of a tree and it's absolutely riveting. (pls don't tell me that I surely read _____'s famous one in Advanced English during high school.) You did a splendid job of bringing the tree to life and giving poetical validity to its emotions. A FAV Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 10:39 AM
I knew, could FEEL such a comment was on the horizon, Mr. ByTheWay, and applaud how subtly you 'slid' it in: Joyce Kilmer / American poet known chiefly for his 12-line verse entitled “Trees.” Now that I've identified him (did ring a bell), I'm off to read the poem, see if it's near as good as yours. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Cornish Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 4:19 AM
Dear Cay cay, thank you! BTW, the trees are starting to get color (tinge) here in NH - Mr. Kilmer would approve!
Toney Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 12:13 AM
Craig, love the nostalgia and resilience displayed by your ‘Old Red Maple.’ The last stanza is delightful. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 15 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. We’re well past the halfway point! Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 15 blog post.
Cornish Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 4:16 AM
Thanks so much Mark, I'm honored to be among these fine poets
Delaney Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 7:10 AM
So beautifully written....I love this and have added it to my favorites. Best, SuZ
Cornish Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Honored Suz--Thank You
Ashley Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Wow what a superb poem Craig. Beautifully personified, I feel love and empathy for this dignified old red maple tree. A really gorgeous write that I truly enjoyed this morning. Thank you Craig for your lovely poem!
Cornish Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thank You Susan!
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