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the old poets

The old poets haunt me
they taunt me from the shadows
following every keystroke I type -
they’re critical of phrases,
they demand narrower themes
and mock the very clichés they invented.

I remind these frightful spirits of how tenuous
life was, how I’m blindly living these experiences,
how prevalent desire is, how human it is to chase
the things we’re told will fulfill us, like goals and love.

I try and explain this Internet thing, how the more copious
my writings, the more people it says are following me.
How I really don’t want to sound paranoid
but as hard as I try - I don’t see anyone.
.
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Song for this:
Too Much Time On My Hands by Styx
Reelin' In The Years by Steely Dan
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Thomas Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 8:25 AM
We never see the ghosts that follow us, do we? Nicely done. Anais is a lovely name. It is the name of my character in The End Of All Things sci-fi novel. Anyway, kudos for the great poem.
Vionet Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Thanks =] I meant I do see any followers - but it works either way. Anais is just plain old "Anna," in French. Unfortunately, it's about as exotic as Joe.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 5:44 AM
Ah yes, That would be the very nature of ghosts Anais, (not being able to see them) still it’s comforting to know even young poets have demons, (keep it tight) sorry is that a cliche, love the wordplay going on here, cheers David
Vionet Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 4:02 PM
I left it as ambiguous but I really meant I didn’t see any followers =]
Vionet Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thanks, David =]
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