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The old poets haunt me they taunt me from the shadows following every keystroke I type - they’re critical of phrases, they demand narrower themes and mock the very clichés they invented. I remind these frightful spirits of how tenuous life was, how I’m blindly living these experiences, how prevalent desire is, how human it is to chase the things we’re told will fulfill us, like goals and love. I try and explain this Internet thing, how the more copious my writings, the more people it says are following me. How I really don’t want to sound paranoid but as hard as I try - I don’t see anyone. . . Song for this: Too Much Time On My Hands by Styx Reelin' In The Years by Steely Dan

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Date: 10/23/2024 8:25:00 AM
We never see the ghosts that follow us, do we? Nicely done. Anais is a lovely name. It is the name of my character in The End Of All Things sci-fi novel. Anyway, kudos for the great poem.
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Date: 10/23/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thanks =] I meant I do see any followers - but it works either way. Anais is just plain old "Anna," in French. Unfortunately, it's about as exotic as Joe.
Date: 8/20/2024 5:44:00 AM
Ah yes, That would be the very nature of ghosts Anais, (not being able to see them) still it’s comforting to know even young poets have demons, (keep it tight) sorry is that a cliche, love the wordplay going on here, cheers David
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Date: 8/20/2024 4:02:00 PM
I left it as ambiguous but I really meant I didn’t see any followers =]
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Date: 8/20/2024 6:39:00 AM
Thanks, David =]

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