The Old Oak Table

There, in the kitchen of this modest dwelling,
A cheerful room, in spite of its lack of grandness
Home to the little family
Who gathered together each evening
For string beans and mashed potatoes,
Eating with relish at the rectangle of oak
They recounted a day filled with stories
Of the playground mishap,
Of the clearance sale at the hardware store,
Significant things or things without matter

The scene reconstructed, each night of the week
With new accounts of a busy day
A ritual never lacking in importance.
This coming together at the end of the day,
While chomping away on an unidentifiable casserole,
Filling the belly, as well as the soul,
Consuming tidbits of noodles, and wisdom and the love of being together.

Until, one day it was time to retire
The humble piece of oak with the four wobbly legs
For something more presentable.  Something more impressive,
That would serve the expanse of a family
Which had grown in numbers throughout the years.

How could anyone have known the significance
Of that aging old table with its warp in the middle?
The sag she had tried to hide with a checkered cloth.
Those who sat there day after day, hardly aware of it's meaning.
This old oak piece, having withstood crayon marks, spilled milk,
Even small holes from the time when father, while repairing a picture frame,
Had accidently hammered nails all the way through and into it's top.

Who knew that a weathered old piece of wood would be witness
To such love and importance
And in itself, was more worthy than
Anything this family could have ever imagined?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/11/2009 9:31:00 AM
this reminded me of our table we had I always called it gods table to fit 13 folks around it each meal it even had a center piece loved this write and enjoyed the imagery too thanks for sharing and congrats on being featured this week also thanks for your many many kind comments
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:54:00 PM
What a beautiful and expressive piece. I enjoyed reading it and reminiscing about favorite pieces of furniture in my life that have shared so many memories. What wonderful tales they could tell if only they could talk. Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 10/9/2009 10:38:00 AM
Wonderful poem with beuatiful imagery. Congratulations on having this piece fatured this week. Love...Janette
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Date: 10/9/2009 2:53:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/6/2009 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on this endearing piece being featured this week, Carrie! Beautiful write! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/6/2009 8:25:00 AM
If that table could only talk, eh? Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:03:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week Carrie >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:35:00 AM
Hi Carrie Congrats hun on your outstanding write being featured this week. Smile. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 10/4/2009 11:32:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Carrie.Rgds Brian
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