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The Old Man and the Singer- Mystic

The Old Man and the Singer- Mystic

it was like the old man
aged and rustic
a Singer sewing machine
oddity to find in a river
rusted, like the old man
orange, colored rust
carried downstream
by a strong current and 
a stronger shoulder
contemporaries they were
him and the machine
tan and tawny
both had spent too much time in
water and sun
the old man was battered but sturdy
the machine-a fossil of yesterdays
to him it was 
a prized thing
harboring an industrial memory
of laboring hands
an antiquated Singer
what use had he for it
in its horribly decayed shape 
yet, it was carried 
downstream
by an old man
to a new destiny

9/28/17
Image Me A Poem

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:10:00 AM
Really enjoyed this take on the picture ... very thoughtful and well-phrased, Janis! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:41:00 PM
Well done and congratulations on this one, Janis.
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:56:00 PM
Janis, magical write, I love it ! Congratulations !
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:51:00 AM
Back to Congratulate you!
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Date: 9/29/2017 9:32:00 AM
Now this is great creativity and imagery. I could see the age and weathering on both the old man and the old machine! A fav my friend.. thanks..
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Date: 9/27/2017 9:14:00 PM
Wow!! Pretty awesome write, Janis, the imagery is magnificent! Luck in the contest a winner already . Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/27/2017 9:45:00 AM
Love the metaphor, both once strong sturdy and useful now left to the ravages of time
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:43:00 AM
Wonderful images indeed Janis. I enjoyed this poem.
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