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The Old Man and the Singer- Mystic

The Old Man and the Singer- Mystic it was like the old man aged and rustic a Singer sewing machine oddity to find in a river rusted, like the old man orange, colored rust carried downstream by a strong current and a stronger shoulder contemporaries they were him and the machine tan and tawny both had spent too much time in water and sun the old man was battered but sturdy the machine-a fossil of yesterdays to him it was a prized thing harboring an industrial memory of laboring hands an antiquated Singer what use had he for it in its horribly decayed shape yet, it was carried downstream by an old man to a new destiny 9/28/17 Image Me A Poem

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:10:00 AM
Really enjoyed this take on the picture ... very thoughtful and well-phrased, Janis! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:41:00 PM
Well done and congratulations on this one, Janis.
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:56:00 PM
Janis, magical write, I love it ! Congratulations !
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:51:00 AM
Back to Congratulate you!
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Date: 9/29/2017 9:32:00 AM
Now this is great creativity and imagery. I could see the age and weathering on both the old man and the old machine! A fav my friend.. thanks..
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Date: 9/27/2017 9:14:00 PM
Wow!! Pretty awesome write, Janis, the imagery is magnificent! Luck in the contest a winner already . Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/27/2017 9:45:00 AM
Love the metaphor, both once strong sturdy and useful now left to the ravages of time
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:43:00 AM
Wonderful images indeed Janis. I enjoyed this poem.
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