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The Old Man and the Sea

Guardian Angel cries Reality roars: Shipwrecked! Seaman's Dad hoping...

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/4/2010 11:46:00 PM

How original..congrats my friend. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2010 8:15:00 PM

Very apt title. Congrats on the win

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2010 6:20:00 PM

"You got it pop a top" A smile, and an Agape. Ps Moses!!!!!!!!!

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2010 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations Iolanda on your winning poem. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2010 5:41:00 PM

You told a story in three, brief lines...well done, Iolanda!! Congratulations on your win! ~ Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2010 5:32:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in this contest.. an awesome write and win for u my friend so enjoy.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2010 3:49:00 PM

Perfect depiction of that awesome photo of the dragon.. good luck in this contest as its going to be difficult for Carolyn to judge from all the super entries I have read.. and only 5 winners ..boo hoo... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2010 8:12:00 PM

sad sea drift, of a memory, or tale, enjoyed the read,..p..d

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2010 9:52:00 AM

Oh, what an interesting take on the picture, Iolanda! and that was funny about pajama party. Who said anything about pajamas? hahaha

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2010 8:55:00 AM

ENJOYED THIS GOOD WRITE

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/2/2010 6:19:00 AM

I can see that ...Great interpertation of the picture...Should be in the winner's circle...Good luck..Sara

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/2/2010 2:20:00 AM

A lot said in such few words. Great Senryu.