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The Old Cathedral

Violet light filters through cracks in the stained glass florets, shining in broken segments over the ashen pews; shadows dance to and fro across the altar. A beauty of abandonment resides in the scene: in the wooden floor panels, coated thickly with dust, the intricate murals displayed on the vaulted ceiling, dulled with age. It holds a haunting silence, broken on occasion by the flapping wings of pigeons, the meowing of alleycats, or the creaking of the stairwell as the ghosts of children play.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 10:52:00 AM
You have a wonderful theme here Shaina.... I would not go near the place... LOL... Love it SKAT
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Date: 4/16/2015 6:26:00 PM
Wow, that is so eerie! You did well on this piece. I didn't see the end coming! Wonderful twist. Love your writing! <3 Tash
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:57:00 PM
Another great write, love me some "haunting silence" and "beauty of abandonment", stoicism can yield some of life's truest forms of grandeur. Keep writing and sharing.
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