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Each piece of greenery falls to mildew. On wood, a harsh fungus echoes sinew. Agony squirmed and sloughed in my body Then, all tumble, I grieve and feel guilty. Glare from sunlight is gentler than rougher Neither full nor snares my kindness, ever. In this skirmish, there is a yearly brawl. Yet, Vivid lights will no longer dazzle. My feet will at last splash out all I've done. Assume strolling on a once lush and shone. The thrills strike my spirit and shred the core. And then sing the fall in calm voice ashore. You adorn your womb and lure us each year. Yet, the loathsome frost's weep I overhear.
Written: December 11, 2021 1st place contest winner. Sonnet's Salutation Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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