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The Nothings

My mood tells me I have nothing left to say I'll give up poetry Forget it and walk away I can't figure out How trying harder Doesn't make me better Maybe I had limited lines Now I'm empty My mood tells me I have nothing left to say I'll give up poetry Forget it and walk away Stagnation is an ugly word Has that happened to me I can't redirect any which way Facing only a wall of grey Now I'm empty My mood tells me I have nothing left to say I'll give up poetry Forget it and walk away Fed up of checking if it rhymes Checking syllable counts Forget it and walk away *Just a mood on a page

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/31/2023 3:25:00 AM

Glad that is fiction. Hahahah I just read what Terry said and I was about to type the same word.. Rubbish.. if it isn't Fiction. Forget all the restrictions and crazy forms of poetry and write the way you feel. You are a terrific poet.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/31/2023 3:30:00 AM

Thanks Wen :)

Terry Ireland

Date: 3/31/2023 1:09:00 AM

With due respect, what rubbish. You have lots to say and you say it well. I don't comment much because of typing problems but i read a lot and hope to continue reading many more of yours. Carry On Dilly

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/31/2023 3:30:00 AM

Thank you Terry, I'll keep at it. I'm full of emotion today, I'll need to send it somewhere

Terry Ireland
Date: 3/31/2023 2:31:00 AM

I chose those words carefully to get your attention. There aren't any rules to creativity except your own, and you do that pretty well xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/31/2023 2:19:00 AM

Haha I startled when I read the first 5 words then! Thanks Terry. I'm just frustrated that I don't always understand the rules to follow. Thank you so much for your comment, I never know if many end up getting read then I ponder that in truth it shouldn't matter. Thank you :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 3/30/2023 5:22:00 PM

As Paul says, it's a common fail. Trying to bring to the page what we know to be true can be evasive yet obsessive. Relax and flow, that's the way to go. Thanks for posting this piece worth pondering. ~;o)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/30/2023 11:05:00 PM

Thank you Arlo, I'm always incredibly affected by outside forces and I need to figure out more resilience. Thank you for your kind words

Paul Willason

Date: 3/30/2023 3:27:00 PM

Now this is a place where we have all been...a great description of the internals of the mood. Bit like a headache, thankfully it passes.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/30/2023 3:36:00 PM

It always does. Thanks for your comment